Comments | jbmaunier: if the pieces fit

jbmaunier

if the pieces fit

Mar 23, 2011 20:38

if the pieces fit
1,837 words | 2min
Sometimes twelve steps are a lifetime away.

( Taemin is six years old and Minho is eight. They’re best friends and when you’re six years old, that’s all that matters. )

shinee, !fanfic, 2min

Comments 16

rainstormraider March 24 2011, 01:32:33 UTC

Whoa.
That was GORGEOUS!
And I like how you flipped the switch at the end and made Yoogeun the narrator......
It was sad, poignant, and very beautiful.....
I adore tragic love stories where the real fault is not due to destiny but human frailty instead.....
You did an amazing job!
:D

tsme89 March 24 2011, 04:02:42 UTC

Oh my god the end. Heart is eternally broken stupid fucking Minho!

thevanillacity March 24 2011, 04:04:51 UTC

i gotta say, it's been a while since i've read something this beautifully written.

i absolutely love this! i love how it seems like taemin and minho would end up together but it turns out differently. such a bittersweet story.

thanks for sharing!

amberrhapsody March 24 2011, 07:24:40 UTC

;________________________;
this broke my heart. Need I say more?

/bawlslikeababy

mangotae March 24 2011, 07:31:56 UTC

Oh gosh. That was amazing, breath taking in fact :')
The ending broke my heart tho D':

Really beautiful, I enjoyed it :)