Exploring what your character wants

Jul 17, 2017 04:00

Hi Teachers!

Welcome to Week 2 of Teachers Write! I hope you enjoyed your first week. It was filled with inspiring lessons! If you're stumbling across this post and don't know what Teachers Write is, Check it out here.Today, let's talk a little about characters and what they want. As you know, the plot of a story is basically all about what the ( Read more... )

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Bailey - What does he want? Who is he? ext_4182957 July 17 2017, 18:27:19 UTC
This is a story about a boy, Bailey, who wants time with his dad making models and building things and to not go to school where people bother him, but underneath that, it's a story about a boy who just wants peace and later hope for a brighter future.

Here is Bailey talking:

I wish I could just be home schooled. I hate going on the bus, especially when I have to be the first person picked up. My life would be so calm if I didn’t have to see her on the bus. I wonder if Mom would let me stay home and learn with Dad now that he’s home.

I have never told anyone this, but sometimes I dream I am watching my own dark and rainy funeral.

If I had the guts to tell Debra she’s a thug, I just know she’d deck me.

The only one who really understands me is Dad and that's because he listens to me. I sometimes can’t think of what to say next because there is so much listening on his side. When I feel like we're stuck in the middle of an awkward silence, I look up and he's looking at me. I can’t believe he’s still listening. I say things to him that I would never be able to say to any other.

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Re: Bailey - What does he want? Who is he? jbknowles July 17 2017, 18:47:44 UTC
This is so strong and I love your writing. This line especially: "sometimes I dream I am watching my own dark and rainy funeral." That word "rainy" makes all the difference. I also want to know who "her" is on the bus. Is it Debra? You've got a lot of rich and emotional material here. Thanks for sharing!

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Re: Bailey - What does he want? Who is he? ext_4182957 July 17 2017, 18:54:46 UTC
Wow, thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate your taking the time to give us all your sweet feedback. (It is Debra.)

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