Author:
empressearwig Recipient:
coffeecommunityTitle: The Talk is Louder Than I'll Sing
Characters: Nick, Miley, Joe, Demi, David, Selena, Kevin, Nicole Anderson, Chelsea Staub
Pairings: Nick/Miley
Rating: R
Wordcount: 9700
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: This isn't real, none of this happened, it is all for fun, etc.
A/N: Thanks to
leobrat and
perfectlystill for reading this and
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but he can't stop wondering if Miley is thinking about how she thought they'd get married someday. Because he can't seem to think about anything else.
I love this line so much, because I've spent more time than I should thinking about this very thing? Yeah, I don't know. It's just great and makes my heart flutter and hurt and feel so many different emotions.
He sees Joe reach out to twirl a piece of Demi's hair and Demi bat his hand away. He notices the way that David's arm is balanced over the back of Selena's chair, the way that Selena is leaning back into it just a little.
I love the details you've added here and how you incorporate the other characters and (possible) pairings into this. It is so perfect and natural and one of my favorite things. They're all just so in character and so adorable and I want everything to be like this all of the time.
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Anyway, this was gorgeous. I especially loved how shy Miley suddenly was in the water. It just felt very realistic.
And all the Disney kids! If they're all at the wedding, I hope something like this really happens, haha. Not that we'd find out.
I absolutely loved this! (Moar?)
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My weakness for this pairing has always been when they just can't stop feeling for each other, no matter what, and you captured that so perfectly.
Every scene in this was so lovely and captured a separate little aspect of Nick and Miley and how they feel about each other. I loved how much they were aware of each other the entire time, but also uncertain and maintaining that distance, not sure what their situation is.
The entire time on the beach was wonderful! I loved Miley's exuberance and daring and Nick trying to hold everything together but just not being able to in the face of Miley. Their characterization throughout was really great actually. Annnnd the sex was pretty great too.
Supporting cast! Joe and Demi! David and Selena! All my buttons at once!
Anyway, I could talk about this pairing forever, but I will not in favour of just saying again how much I love this. :)
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