Sweet Song - Orihime/Rukia NC-17

[jazz_trousers]

So, I finally made good on my threats, and I wrote some yuri. RukiHime <3

Title: Sweet Song
Characters: Orihime/Rukia
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Inoue had become a woman, in Rukia’s absence. An absolutely jaw-dropping specimen of female kind. Smut with a dash of fluff.

Comments

[ichibanseiken]

Actually, this was rather good. You are right that it's more personal because, after all, this is the sort of sex we can have. Writing guys is "safer" emotionally, somehow. Thus, congratulations!

[jazz_trousers]

Thanks!! I'm so happy you think it's good~

[blue_eyesgirl]

♥ I love this it's so cute and hot at the same time! Great work :3

(And yeah I know what you mean XD They say write what you know but er.. well... It's hard! There's just no word for female genetalia that I'm confortable using and it's hard to get around ;3;)

[jazz_trousers]

Thank you <3 I'm glad you like it.

(Oh, I love every word there is for the female vajayjay, but none of them are very... literary, haha)

[blue_eyesgirl]

:3

(Haha yeah, I kinda tend towards pussy but it sounds very porno like XDDD)

[writerx75]

Mmmm...I really liked this. These two are really sweet, the way you write them together, and the whole mood of this was really lovely.

Good on you for having written something that feels more you to you...I can tell from reading it that it comes more comfortably to you, and the piece definitely gained from that. Well done!

[jazz_trousers]

*squeals and hugs* Thank you!! I feel really good about this.