FIC: Inevitability (Spock/Kirk, 1/1)

[jaylee_g]

Title: Inevitability
Author: Jaylee
Fandom: Star Trek Reboot
Pairing: Spock/Kirk
Rating: PG
Summary: Companion piece to my story "Improbability", told from Spock's POV. "He would figure Jim Kirk out eventually -- it simply required more observation and the accumulation of data."
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: I do not own characters, I'm just borrowing

Comments

[sweill]

In a word - perfect.

[jaylee_g]

Thanks so much, you have me blushing! :-)

[garryowen]

[jaylee_g]

Thanks! I'm so touched that you liked it. I must admit, it was a lot harder to do Spock's POV than Kirk's, so it thrills me that you liked the analytical tone... that's exactly what I was aiming for in my attempt to capture Spock.

Thanks again! :-)

[gentle_thorns]

These two fics are awesome :D

just one teeny tiny thing: as long as Jim was the one to illicit those responses
that should be elicit

[jaylee_g]

Thanks for pointing that out, I appreciate it, I went in and fixed it.

And thanks for the wonderful feedback, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed both stories. :-)

[blcwriter]

The image of how Jim's energy bleeds into Spock with each casual touch is just so affecting. Nice work.

[jaylee_g]

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story. It is wonderful to hear what specific things in the story worked well - I appreciate you telling me what part you thought stood out. Thanks so much! :-)

[_profiterole_]

That was gorgeous! I loved reading it from Spock's POV.

[jaylee_g]

Thank you for the heartwarming feedback. I'm so tickled that you enjoyed Spock's POV. I must admit, writing Spock was harder for me than writing Kirk. I love both Spock and Kirk to death, but channeling Spock to write from his logic-minded POV is infinitely more difficult. It is wonderful to hear that the story was enjoyed. :-)