The Seeing Bowl, Chapter Two: Gifts

[jayitaintso]

The Seeing Bowl, Chapter Two:  Gifts

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[amaggiepie]

<3 <3 <3

I love this so far! Wow! What a twist. I'm used to seeing Zutara capture stories with Katara as the captive, but I haven't read one where Zuko is the prisoner yet.

Excited to see more, esepecially what the seeing bowl does!

[xxzutarafanxx]

This is going to be GOOD!

[7_dirty_secrets]

This is super intriguing. Oh, to be a fly on the wall in those barracks.

I think I've only ever read one other Zutara-capture story where Zuko was a Water Tribe prisoner but that's totally different because he couldn't speak their language so there were a ton of other issues to deal with, but I love the plot line. It's such an interesting way to explore the different cultures and the way the characters deal with ethnocentrism and prejudices wow, that sounded really pretentious...

Can't wait to read more!

[kimberly_t]

This is indeed shaping up to be an excellent story!

One little suggestion? This sentence right here, where you wrote "She ignored that she was healing the son of the man who was responsible for the murders of her mother and most of her tribe, and instead tried to concentrate on feeling the chi and blood flow through his body." That would be a good place to insert into the story the fact you told me about when responding to my last comment, that after most of their tribe was killed, Hakoda led the survivors up to the North Pole.

[pinumbra]

I am damning myself currently for being a quick-reader, now I have to wait for the next update ; A;

but very interesting and intrigueing storyline