Beautiful (part 3, chris/eminem)

[jayaslash]

Beautiful
Part: 3/?
by jayaslash
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: chris kirkpatrick/eminem
Word Count: 4,318 so far
Summary: Is it possible to write a sappy Emslash story that is both fluffy, angsty and realistic?  Why, yes, it is!

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April 8, 2002 - Orlando, Florida

Chris held the phone to his ear and listened to it ring for the fourth time as he

Comments

[pensnest]

I hesitated about clicking on this as I'm not remotely interested in Eminem, but it's definitely intriguing. I like the way you took plenty of time in the first two parts, letting there be a glimpse to ignite something, and then having Eminem's growing obsession become clear over a long while. Love the scene in the club-poor deflated Justin!

One thing confused me in this one, though-you have Eminem put the key card into Chris's pocket, and yet it seems to be Eminem going to Chris's room?

Hot stuff, though!

[jayaslash]

I love your icon! Gah....

Um, it is Em's room, Chris was just so eager he got there first...I probably should have made that known in some way.

Okay, I will post in shinyandnew...

Also, thank you so much for reading this. I love everything you write and it means a lot that you're reading and that you took the time out to comment!