j/VJ fic: Glimmer of Blue. Gen.
Hello! I have been retouching a j/vj fic on AO3 (gen) and would really like concrit if anyone wants to read it. Honesty is encouraged. Actually I love the story (probably too much) and have lost my critical faculties -- so I am counting on all of you to tell me what's wrong with it. Thanks! http://archiveofourown.org/works/774845/chapters/1457085