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Stop - Chapter Three Proof of Love

Feb 05, 2008 08:40

Title: Stop, Chapter 3, Proof of Love
Author: jaune_chat
Fandom: Sky High
Characters/Pairing: Warren/Will
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5,601
Spoilers: All of the film
Warnings: Slash
Disclaimer: Sky High is owned by Disney. I make no money.
Notes: This was the first story where I attempted to do an actual romantic relationship. With boys. I’m sorta ( Read more... )

sky high, fic, warren/will, warren peace, slash, will stronghold

Comments 11

ebonhush March 4 2008, 19:28:41 UTC

Now this is more like the lovey-dovey yet slightly angsty Will/Warren I like to see!

“You’re good. You’re good and you still want me. Ok?”

I loved that line; I think it broke my heart a little... I love how you write Warren, I really do. The strong/confident/aware/slightly worried approach he has to life must be a bitch to pin down, but you do it so well!

Looking forward to future chapters of both this and Warren Peace in Mind.

jaune_chat March 5 2008, 07:46:32 UTC

This is proving to be my most in-depth romance to date. In War and Peace In Mind, I skipped a lot of the romantic discussion for several reasons. The plot was kicking into high gear, I'm inexperienced at it, and I didn't want to bore people while I waded through it. Besides, War and Peace In Mind isn't a romance, and while for a story like this extensive romantic discussion is all well and good and expected, I think it would have bogged my epic down farther than it already was.

But, I have some extensive angst with parental units, consequences, and conversations percolating for Stop and I'll get those up... probably after chapter 46 for War and Peace In Mind is done.

mickey_sixx March 13 2008, 00:24:38 UTC

...again, no words. Please tell me there's more?! Please?!? Cause I think I'm going to friend you, because this and Unleashed just....totally blew me away and gave me tingles....

jaune_chat March 13 2008, 06:45:54 UTC

I'm very glad you're liking it Mickey!~ Yes indeed, there is more. I hope to have it up in the next two weeks. More sex, more plot, more angst, confrontations, adventure, excitement! And all that jazz.

bettygoboom March 15 2008, 04:23:40 UTC

i loved this story to pieces
and
*guh*
so hot!

jaune_chat March 16 2008, 11:44:37 UTC

I'm glad you're liking it Betty! :)

sam22_2 August 10 2008, 18:00:52 UTC

I think i'm going to have to friend you! I love this story! I cannot wait to read the rest nor I cannot wait to read your other fics!

jaune_chat August 10 2008, 20:40:53 UTC

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you're liking it!

anonymous August 14 2009, 09:12:59 UTC

>>With Will, it was like a roaring furnace, hot and intense, but infinitely sustainable.<------I like the sentiment expressed here; but I think 'furnace' isn't powerful enough to describe his infinite passion and burning love for Will. I think 'SUN' would be better. Furnaces can change temps easily, they can be shut off, break down. A sun burns for tens of billions of years-self sustaining; always burning in the heavens even if it's on the other side of the world you can still see it's light reflected in the moon at night. I'm not that good with the symbolism/writing stuff-but something like that, but refined by a good writer like you ( ... )