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Iron Age

Aug 10, 2012 03:06

Title: Iron Age
Author: jaune_chat
Fandoms: The Avengers (film), Iron Man (films)
Characters/Relationships: Tony Stark/Pepper Potts, JARVIS, Original Characters
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,627
Spoilers: none
Content Advisory: Some violence, aftermath of injury, angst, future fic
Disclaimer: Not mine, just playing.
A/N: Written for a prompt at avengerkink - "After ( Read more... )

tony/pepper, pepper potts, tony stark, iron man, fic, avengers, original characters

Comments 10

Not OP cutestarrrrr August 10 2012, 12:21:35 UTC

Can I just sit here and love thus fic to pieces?

I love the bit in the end by the way where Tony literally is the armour. "The armour an I are one" anyone?

Perfect.

Re: Not OP jaune_chat August 10 2012, 15:29:05 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

hiddencait August 10 2012, 22:40:56 UTC

OK this was FANTASTIC. I honestly teared up a couple times. So brilliantly done! Course now my brain wonders how the rest of the team evolved over the generations lol... but this totally works as a gorgeous standalone.

jaune_chat August 11 2012, 05:45:49 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

That. Was. AMAZING!! (Not OP) indigo_blitz August 11 2012, 05:09:02 UTC

What the subject line says. That was brilliant! Loved the writing style, liked the way you presented all the snapshots throughout generations, and all the different takes and types of people and situations you put together. You even had twins! That didn't even cross my mind when I saw the prompt and thought of the possibilities. Loved the last snapshot in the series as well; it was an echo of Tony's original situation, like history was repeating itself. Brilliant. Very well done. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us :D

Re: That. Was. AMAZING!! (Not OP) jaune_chat August 11 2012, 05:47:57 UTC

Thank you! The prompt was really interesting, and it was a blast in figuring out what all those different Starks would do with Iron Man. For the last, I figured Tony would want to make sure history, even if it was heading in the same direction, would never truly repeat itself. He could try to protect his descendents from the loneliness he felt.

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jaune_chat August 13 2012, 22:27:56 UTC

Caution is such a tenuous trait in the Stark bloodline...

Thanks so much, and I'm really glad you liked it! :D

Amazing anonymous August 20 2012, 02:22:46 UTC

This is utterly brilliant. I love how they all seem like people I would know and like even though they've only got a few paragraphs each. I also love how they're not all carbon copies of Tony but you can still see the Stark traits threading through the generations :)

Re: Amazing jaune_chat August 20 2012, 05:33:37 UTC

Thank you so much! I really had a good time thinking up all the different Starks. :)