I seldom do story critiques outside of my work with Apex, so this is a chance to see what it is like to have a story ripped apart from a Kentucky hillbilly who happens to run a publishing company. :)
Here's a link to the raffle items:
http://www.apexbookcompany.com/cart.php?m=product_list&c=7 10% of all proceeds goes to Dolly Parton's Imagination Library (a program that gives books to kids). Horror and Dolly go hand in hand, folks.