[fic] Giving Full Attention - 1/1 - Donghae-centric

[jarringvacuity]

Title: Giving Full Attention
Chapter: 1/1
Author: jarringvacuity
Genre: AR
Warnings: Some disorder
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Donghae-centric, with Ryeowook, Eeteuk, Yesung, Heechul; Hankyung/Heechul
Synopsis: Lee Donghae, 24, is not quite the normal kid.
Comments: Careless writing, bad grammar, short, etc. I suck at coming up with titles.
Disclaimer: Purely fictional. I

Comments

[amethyst_realm]

Don't be too hard on yourself =3 Isn't it enough that you're my only 19 year old girl who isn't only capable of writing above averagely but can be my rant/rave buddy in regards to fanfiction? X3;; It's kind of a long story but to give a condensed version, I've been reading some fics that were supposedly written by 19 year old writers, which either makes me want to gouge my eyes out or make me look like this =| all throughout.

Donghae here is both good and evil. He is blameless but at the same time the root of suffering by the people around him. Therein lies another irony of the entire thing: as you said, he is simple, but his actions lead him to be indirectly manipulative towards his hyungs and dongsaeng--and he can get away with it because of his condition, because if he was normal he'd have already been beaten up @_@

Aww~ *ruffles your hair* Writers constantly find ways to improve so you're not alone in that department =D I really, sincerely hope that you will slowly ease yourself back to the swing of writing; I believe you have potential that you need to nourish so it can flourish fully, and that you still have plenty of things left to share with us. Ganbatte! 8Dv ♥