[ CASTLE / fanfiction, chapters 1-3 / R / smut, WWII, violence ]

[dreamsofdest1ny]

a castle of silence and bones

My latest Japan/China fanfiction.
(cross-posted, in actual chapters, on FFN)

what if--?
WWII was won by the Axis Powers.
Imperial Japan gained control of Asia.
The world, as we know it, was never there.

Comments

EHHHH.

[exotification]

*shrugs* What can I say? It is pretty awesome.

The imagery--the brevity--the chapter titles, and your usage of layout for a total demolishing of the fourth wall. Sweet story, would like to see more.

Re: EHHHH.

[dreamsofdest1ny]

Aw, thank you!

I'm worried about the shortness of the whole thing. I really, really, really just wanted something dark and sexy and smutty and kinky so I could work out all this bad-sex!frustration.

Re: EHHHH.

[exotification]

Well, you're definitely succeeding with the dark part, not too certain about the smutty and/or sexy, but I guess kinky pretty much applies to everything nowadays so yeah.

How bad are you talking here?

Re: EHHHH.

[dreamsofdest1ny]

Like, almost ikea-bad. Like;

"And then he raped Yao and Yao was like 'ow'."

*SHuuuuudddddeeerrrrSSS*

So awesome, very much in love!

[anonymous]

Wow!
This is a bloody brilliant fanfiction. I'm a total fan of historical accuracy and whatnot, but properly done historical AU is my secret love~

And with Japan/China no less!

Thank you so much for posting this

Re: So awesome, very much in love!

[anonymous]

I mean, the chapter titles especially, and your description of the fanfiction "short, subtle, sensual; sexual" is just spot-on as well. I really appreciate how you manage to fit everything into under 500 words, I find that amazing, seriously.

Re: So awesome, very much in love!

[dreamsofdest1ny]

Really?

I always thought that the opposite, writing over five hundred words, was the hard part, because, well, it is is, I guess...?

*fail*

Re: So awesome, very much in love!

[acquiesceme]

*laughs* Well, I thought that brevity was a hard thing to achieve, particularly because you've got to be really precise and concise at the same time, something that I'm desperately trying to do.

WOW~

[acquiesceme]

Um, wow.

Wow.
Wow.
WOW.
WOW~

I don't know about you, but I think that this is the start of a seriously win! fanfiction here. I mean, your title is really lovely, and the writing is too, and sometimes, you just want to read something that is short and sweet, you know?

OTL

Re: WOW~

[acquiesceme]

One note I must add though: I think that you should post it chapter by chapter, because
1- LJ's cuts really annoy me, particularly if they're multiple cuts...!
2- Even though they're (relatively short, they still take quite the wiole to scroll through and through and through...

...So yeah.

Re: WOW~

[dreamsofdest1ny]

Really?

You don't think that the chapters are too short? I'm worried that I'll be spamming the community with my fanfiction...!

Re: WOW~

[acquiesceme]

*laughs more*

You? Spamming the community? When hell freezes over, maybe~ And believe me, short chapter are MUCH LOVE after *coughcoughcoughcough* five thousand word behemoths...!