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kiku/yao with four very unique variations.
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Admin!note: huge member wipe--sorry about that! However, this also means that I plan to actively!post on this community once again, what with the coming of summer and whatnot. Remember to always follow the guidelines for posting (and the rules in general), please don't feel
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I'm so glad you're back. I thought it was dead here...
So now I'm going to put a link of this on my Nichu group. >w<
Please keep adding more drabbles. We needs them. And here, skin through the ones I wrote for my nichu group and tell me if they're good enough to put here.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5998805/1/In_Which_Japan_Teaches_America_About_Tsunderes
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5876476/1/Rolling_Heat
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5839213/1/Extreme_East_Asian_Brothers_Drabbles
And here's the nichu group!
http://nichu-rizhong-fc.deviantart.com/
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I do need to work on making my stories flow more, so thank you for reminding me. Rolling Heat was more choppy because I wanted it to sound like explosions, but obviously that wasn't the only way to do it, and it certainly wasn't the best. xp
Did you, by chance, just skim through the rest of Rolling Heat? It's not sex.
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Then... what is it? o___O *is really surprised and equally embarrassed*
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Well now, where's your mind these days? Hmm? xDDDDDDDD
heeheeheeeheeheeheee...I'm sorry. I am. It's just...eheehehehee!
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(delayed response much, sorry about that! /___\)
Okay, I must confess that I actually DID read the whole thing the first time. And then a second time when I was critiquing. However, I'm also fairly delusional and able to see the world "panhandle" as a euphemism for dirty things so YEAH.
*coughs* As embarrassing as this is, I still have the gall to say that I feel my critique still stands in its own right--if only because you are purposely trying to make this look like a sex-scene, right? xD
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I saved your critique, and I'll make sure to keep it in mind. Thank you!
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