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Apparently I inspired my brother to "write a movie" as he calls it. To say the least, I was quite impressed and decided to post it on here for all of you guys to read. Enjoy! (PS...My brother is in 2nd grade, and some of the words I cant tell what the heck he's trying to spell so bear with me.)
The Guy
Once thar (there) was a guy (who) can do (anything). Once (there) was a crime. So he (flew there) as fast as (possible). But (when) he got (there) the (place) was flaming. "(Good) thing he laf a chral!!!" So he (flew) off. But war he (landed) was a (universe) of baby (ninjas). So he (fought them) off.
Too bad his (job) is (never done).
So he (flew) to his hotel.
And (napped) until ge (heard) a(n) (explosion). So he (flew slow) and (exhauseted?) (Until) he found out it was his (parents). (Then) he really kicked but. But he (forgot) his extreme (secret). Now his (secret) has been (revealed). (poor) guy. Now his parents know his secret! But he just discovered that it was his worst enemy. So he powered up extreme fast. ANd sis his mega punch and blo her right out of the universe. Ans then she did. Then he got extremely knocked out. So his parents came there fast. His parents were extreme mega sad. But he woke up but he could only see blirs. Then he saw clear. Then he (punched?) a nurse. The nurse called the cops. Then he almost got in prison! Until they noticed it was him. They were curious why he punched a nurse.So they finally figured it out. "According to the calculations he thought she was his worse enemy!
Than he just remembered he had a dangerous mission. So her flew there fast. But her flew in another direction. He just discovered it was a mega game. Oh! Did I fight to mention it wasa game world? Sorry. ON level one was an extreme fight! He got beat up a little. But ok. On level two he had a mega surf. He actually won. When he did a triple back flip on levl three he faced grim reaper. Good thing he survived or he would die. Now he had to beat the time. It's weird because it's an action story. But he has to beat the time on a snowboard. But can you believe it, he made it. He used his hyper speed and rested in a cave. He found something hanging. It was the tykwondo sword. "Wow the tykwondo sword, how rare."
So he put thw sword on his back sword pocket. The powerful sword gave him agilities. It also gave him both evil and good powers. It was so powerful it could almost carry itself.
As you can tell I got sick of the parenthesis.
Thats all he has written so far, but he writes all the time so im sure there will be more.
Tell me what you think!
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The Guy
Once thar (there) was a guy (who) can do (anything). Once (there) was a crime. So he (flew there) as fast as (possible). But (when) he got (there) the (place) was flaming. "(Good) thing he laf a chral!!!" So he (flew) off. But war he (landed) was a (universe) of baby (ninjas). So he (fought them) off.
Too bad his (job) is (never done).
So he (flew) to his hotel.
And (napped) until ge (heard) a(n) (explosion). So he (flew slow) and (exhauseted?) (Until) he found out it was his (parents). (Then) he really kicked but. But he (forgot) his extreme (secret). Now his (secret) has been (revealed). (poor) guy. Now his parents know his secret! But he just discovered that it was his worst enemy. So he powered up extreme fast. ANd sis his mega punch and blo her right out of the universe. Ans then she did. Then he got extremely knocked out. So his parents came there fast. His parents were extreme mega sad. But he woke up but he could only see blirs. Then he saw clear. Then he (punched?) a nurse. The nurse called the cops. Then he almost got in prison! Until they noticed it was him. They were curious why he punched a nurse.So they finally figured it out. "According to the calculations he thought she was his worse enemy!
Than he just remembered he had a dangerous mission. So her flew there fast. But her flew in another direction. He just discovered it was a mega game. Oh! Did I fight to mention it wasa game world? Sorry. ON level one was an extreme fight! He got beat up a little. But ok. On level two he had a mega surf. He actually won. When he did a triple back flip on levl three he faced grim reaper. Good thing he survived or he would die. Now he had to beat the time. It's weird because it's an action story. But he has to beat the time on a snowboard. But can you believe it, he made it. He used his hyper speed and rested in a cave. He found something hanging. It was the tykwondo sword. "Wow the tykwondo sword, how rare."
So he put thw sword on his back sword pocket. The powerful sword gave him agilities. It also gave him both evil and good powers. It was so powerful it could almost carry itself.
As you can tell I got sick of the parenthesis.
Thats all he has written so far, but he writes all the time so im sure there will be more.
Tell me what you think!
<3