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[jaolianas]

Beltane again. There's not much of it, but I wanted to let you know that I'm not entirely useless and have actually been writing. Once I finish it, you get a story about people as pets. Dee is to blame for that one too.

Also a horse stepped on me and it hurts.

“I can’t believe you,” muttered the brunette, her voice muffled as she pulled off her

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[superfinemind]

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[jaolianas]

It was a bicycle to start out with, now it's not. Bella does not like lifting things, that is Cass's job. I'll change it to a pickup truck, which seems to fix both problems. I like trucks anyway.

Fine, one boy then. And it was a pretty pathetic favor, I think. But I'll mess with it.

You know, that's how I had written it first? Dammit.

Bella wears "that riduculous earth-mother getup" for work. It comes up later, trust me.

I have no idea about the sun. I am probably an idiot. You know how good I am with passage of time.

I'm fixing that paragraph. And it's "small auto" because I got tired of "car" and the only other words I could come up with were voiture and auto, both French, so...

Fixed.

The opening is in the LAST POST YOU MORON.