I figured I owed you lot an update.

[jaolianas]

So my new short story (and if this shows up again in fours months to be looked at for my Intro to Fictional Writing class, you never saw it before, okay?) is a little weird. I'm literally only two paragraphs in and the whole thing keeps shifting around, plotwise. The narrator changed from Big Sister to Little Sister (there are no names yet,

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[raven_wings_]

Want more.
Great last sentence, there...

[persephone_blue]

I would love to read the finished product. This is a pretty good beginning, though.

I'm still super jealous about the fictional writing class. Have fun in there, okay?

[persephone_blue]

Many thanks! It's a fun icon, one of my favorites. I'm nuts about grammar.