making messes matter ; sechen ; king!sehun

Jun 28, 2016 03:04

Title: Making messes matter
Rating: nc-17
Pairing: Sehun/Jongdae
Wordcount: 9,030
Warning: Unbetaed. VERY SELF INDULGENT. (Very badly written porn too lmao is that even porn)
Disclaimer: EXO belongs to themselves and SME
Notes: Sehun wore a crown, cla triggered my sechen feels, and nonsense happened. I'm sorry you all have to witness my failed ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, length: oneshot, pairing: jongdae/sehun, fic: exo

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aprilclash June 28 2016, 01:26:06 UTC
Spot ill read this tomorrow but its mine mine mine

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anya_azrael June 28 2016, 07:24:22 UTC
How to even feel?????

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kiki_bw June 28 2016, 07:39:31 UTC
i want to SCREAM but i don't want to scream bc im in public BUT I WANT TO SCREAM YOU WROTE SECHEN WITH KING SEHUN AND SPY JONGDAE THATS LIKE THE AU OF MY DREAMS SLY SPY JONGDAE WHO KNOWS THE INS AND OUTS OF EVERYTHING INCLUDING SEHUN. LITERALLY.

I SHOULD STOP SCREAMING but i already screamed in your dms too lol oops? ;;;

all in all, i love this, i love sechen and i will gladly join your quest to make sechen rule the world. thank you for writing this❤ also f*ck writer's block, what's that?

special thank you to your friend for facilitating this lol

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caterplina June 28 2016, 17:34:35 UTC
Are you kidding me? Point out what's bad about this fic for me, because i didn't see it lol

I LOVED IT!!

First of all, Jongdae. I would say he stole the show, but tbh he WAS the show. His character was amazing, you did a great job on him, from his voice to his expressions. The way he appeared in the rooms
suddenly was so cool. I even thought for a moment that he was part of Sehun's imagination, a way of coping with his father's death.

I loved Sehun too. I loved the pressure he felt to be like his father, from everyone and also from himself. It was so interesting that he instantly trusted Jongdae and in the end when Jongdae talks about the King, it really makes sense why Sehun would trust him.

(Donghae as the king... I'm not sobbing. i swear)

The whole build up from Sehun trusting Jongdae to wanting him was perfect (the scene in the banquet, when he finds Jongdae so beautiful was wonderful to read).

I loved it!
even with writer's block you can still write great things. props to cla for making you write this lol

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charliebnim June 29 2016, 07:27:06 UTC
Amazing :D !!! More more more on this !!

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