Prisoner of Love (fanfic)

[janipanda]

Comments

[molskee]

First? XD

Ah, Jun's fic! Been waiting for this and it doesn't disappoint!

This bishounen concept is interesting! I can't wait for the next chapters!

So glad that you finally have this up!

[janipanda]

Thanks! And will try to update as much as I can. I tend to write too long of a chapter. Just hard for me to know when to stop. DX

[myka551]

i like it 8D

will be waiting for the second chapter ~

[janipanda]

Thank you! This is the second chapter. The first chapter has the link above!

[lilli_evans]

Damn. I guess Jun was a little hurt by the way she was treating him and I guess not using the honorific probably helped with that neh? Cause its like a lack of respect.

When he called her a bitch I was like whoaaa there that's not very professional. Still at least he tried to be nice to her. I hope he doesn't think too badly of Selena and they try to be nicer to each other. After all he is her assigned waiter so whenever she comes in he's going to be there.

Uwahh woman keep writing =D

[janipanda]

Selina was definitely being too bratty here I think. And yes, not adding the -san to the end specially to someone you are not familiar with(or related or friends with) means being disrespectful.

Lol. I guess Jun did go a wee bit out of line with the name calling. Although I guess that's why he whispered that to her so that if she complains, no one might collaborate that he was being disrespectful.

You just have to see what happens ne? And yes, I will keep writing and update soon.

thanks for the comment!

[kujirai]

I got lots of laughs out of this chapter :)
It feels like this kind of role would be perfect for Jun if he did a drama like this :3

Silly Selena doesn't realize she;s only being mean because she likes him :3

[janipanda]

You think so huh? Wouldn't it reveal too much of a normal Jun than the Jun that acts?

And oohhh....someone's caught on! XP