fic, Supernatural: Four Times Dean Winchester Broke Something And One He Didn't (Dean/Castiel), PG13

Jun 25, 2009 01:17

... aaand, I'm back on the alphabet meme prompts! I just want to finish it. It has become a matter of honor, lol. And er, I dunno when I'll manage to answer any comments to this because it's late already and I'm off tomorrow morning, so if I don't answer for the next two days sorry for that.

Title: Four Times Dean Winchester Broke Something And ( Read more... )

fanfiction:supernatural, character: sam winchester, pairing: dean/castiel, character: castiel, character: dean winchester

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9_of_clubs June 25 2009, 00:00:40 UTC
Little does he know that this is the last time in his life when he’s allowed to think of a broken tape as a tragedy. This made me smile sadly for Dean because its so true...*hugs Dean*

Dean thinks for a second that maybe, if Castiel had a heart and if it could break, it’d have made the same noise that statue did as it fell on the floor. T.T, perfect imagery here - I felt so bad for Cas when Dean broke that statue... and the comparison here makes the point so wonderfully.

Well, he wasn’t going to drive Ruby’s car on principle *giggle* oh Ruby I hate you.

“I would be grateful,” Castiel whispers, taking the coat off. Dean bites his tongue when he sees that the shirt is completely soaked in blood .*squeeeee* I am in love with this line. I want it, I want it so much. Show are you listening? I want that *points*

“Not anymore,” Castiel answers, the right corner of his lips turned up in a smirk, and Dean just smiles back, starts the car again and turns up the volume. weeee full circle <3333 ( ... )

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janie_tangerine June 26 2009, 14:29:36 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm really happy you liked this, and thanks also for quoting what you thought was best. ;) And yeah, that thing about the tape actually made me want to hug him while writing it so figure it out. Poor, poor Dean.

I felt so bad for Cas when Dean broke that statue

*hugs Castiel for good measure too* That was such a great moment though. Even if sad as hell. And HA, well, I hate Ruby too so I guess we're in good company. ;) And I want that too actually. Show, do it, I won't even sue you if it happens that way. *cough*

And I had wanted to try the full circle for a while, much glad that it worked for you here. Also, thanks so much about the bit with Sam, that was the hardest part to do actually. Again, thank you! ♥

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enemyanemone June 25 2009, 00:06:46 UTC
Wow, all kinds of amazing. Love the broken angel statue imagery and the ending :)

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janie_tangerine June 26 2009, 14:24:14 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! ♥ ♥

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janie_tangerine June 26 2009, 14:25:31 UTC
Heee, Zeppelin rules!! ;) And ha, you and Dean would hit off on Ramble On I guess! My favorites are more on III actually, but Zeppelin is Zeppelin, right?

And thank you so much, glad you liked it!

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villainxatxhert June 25 2009, 00:42:22 UTC
The imagery was perfect and I loved how the whole thing came full circle at the end. Well Done!

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janie_tangerine June 26 2009, 14:22:07 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it (and the structure especially, I had never tried that kind specifically. ;) ), thanks again!

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kaddywhak June 25 2009, 01:32:00 UTC
Castiel is definitely the best kind of band-aid... Also duct-tape. :P Awesome story.

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janie_tangerine June 26 2009, 14:20:54 UTC
LOL, Castiel totally is the best duck tape ever! I love the expression. ;) Thank you!

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