fic, Lost: I Lost It (or four people who lost Boone Carlyle's heart and one who didn't), R

[janie_tangerine]

Er. Right. This thing took, like, three months or so and I managed to finish it just because the fix-it challenge made me re-write a good part of it and gave me an idea to actually make it work and well, here it goes.

Title: I Lost It (or four people who lost Boone Carlyle's heart and one who didn't)
Rating: R or something along those lines. There

Comments

[elise_509]

This was fantastic, I loved seeing Boone and Jack from so many different points of view. Boone sure did get around that island, didn't he? I'm glad he ended up with Jack of course and that Kate got a big kick in the head as a bonus. :)

[janie_tangerine]

Thank you! I don't know where the multiple POVs thing came from but I kinda liked the idea I have to say. And HA, yes, he did! Poor guy, it took him three tries though. ;) And Kate totally deserved it, lol. Thanks again! ♥

[valhalla37]

I LOVE this concept in general, but you elevated it even higher with the fantastic writing. The shifts between POV were so spot-on and totally IC; everything felt completely organic and so true to character. And Jack and Shannon's conversation -- so great. Wonderful job!

[janie_tangerine]

Oh wow, thanks so much!! Seriously, this comment = made my day. I'm so glad you liked this, and especially the shifting POVs because I spent one month wondering if I was just making things too confusing, but I just liked the concept, you know? ;) Jack and Shann0n's conversation was totally one of my favorite parts to do here actually, so even better that you liked that. ;) Thanks so much again, I'm so glad you liked it! ♥

[elliotsmelliot]

The structure to this was so cool! What a creative way to tell your story. I loved the back and forth between the action and the POV reflecting on the new couple. Plus this is the ultimate fix-it, and you know it all got fixed once Boone came clean. Nothing bad can happen now, not with everyone having so much sex, or watching Boone and Jack get it on!

[janie_tangerine]

Wow, thanks so much! I was seriously worried about the structure being too far out but it just wouldn't leave me alone. I did take them from all the possible angles, didn't I? And yeah, seriously, I did go all the way with the fix-it but I figured that since I was there I might just cover it all, right? And no, really! Good sex and stalking Jack and Boone means good things. ;) ♥

[missy_useless]

Oh yay! I think you know how happy this makes me. Boone - alive (and telling them about the hatch). And Jack/Boone. And everything! I loved, loved, loved the whole concept, and the different points of views worked really well, too. Amazing job; thank you so much for writing it! Yay! :D

[janie_tangerine]

Aw, thanks so much! I really didn't know whether the whole shifting POVs thing was going to work but alas, I had the concept in my head and I'm so happy to hear it worked for you! And yeah, alive and spilling it all and hooking up for good, I couldn't fix more than that. ;) Thank you so much! ♥

[jaydblu]

Oooohh, I absolutely loved this. This is a much better story than the Lost writers told! The POV's on this were great, and I loved seeing Kate not getting her man from different viewpoints. :)
And I especially love how you handle the sex scenes, and how tender and loving (but also hot!) they are with Jack and Boone. It's nice that Boone got to try out Charlie and Sawyer as well before he ended up with his ultimate prize! ;)))

[janie_tangerine]

Ha, I did torture the poor guy a bit before giving him the ultimate prize, didn't I? Thank you so much though! ;) And ha, well, anything that includes Boone living, slashing and Kate getting the short stick probably is better than canon but thanks so much for stating it. ♥ Much glad that you liked it!