fic, Lost: Return of the Grievous Angel (Sawyer/Sayid), R, for zelda_zee

[janie_tangerine]

Title: Return of the Grievous Angel
Rating: R
Pairing: Sawyer/Sayid
Word Count: 3400
Disclaimer: Sure, because if Lost was mine everyone would grow wings.
Summary: What’s more astonishing isn’t the fact that Sawyer actually grew wings. It’s that Sayid is the only one that can touch them.
Spoilers: Set in mid-late S1, more or less around Numbers or

Comments

[glycerineclown]

That was awesome! I want a sequel where they fly around together!

[janie_tangerine]

You've got that one booked. Actually I was planning on making them fly here but then it was becoming too much unknown territory and I left it for another time ;) thanks so much!

[zelda_zee]

This is fantastic! I love it! I'm so happy you wrote me wingfic - and of course, it had to be Sawyer with the wings. They suit him so well!

I really love the visuals - the big, white/gray wings spreading at Sayid's touch, the way they move and flutter. The description of the pain and violence and blood when they emerged is great too, as is the way Sawyer & Sayid are cradled by the wings when they fuck.

Wow, I'm so glad I asked for wingfic! I honestly didn't think I'd get any. This is just wonderful and has made me SO happy! Thank you, hon!

[janie_tangerine]

I'm so really glad you liked that one! Well, as soon as I read that request I figured it was too good to pass the opportunity. And it couldn't be no one else with the wings, could it?

It's great to hear you liked the visuals here, I was really trying to get those right here. You're welcome and thanks so much, I'm so flattered right now it's not even funny ;)

[halfdutch]

Oh, wow, hon, that was MAGNIFICENT. This might be my favorite thing you've ever written. I love how the wings draw Sayid -- and only Sayid -- in and how Sawyer has no idea what to do with them at first. The description of the wings is so glorious as well. Wow, loved this! :)

And HEY! You're using the mood theme already, YAY!

[janie_tangerine]

God, now I'm so disgustedly flattered, thank you so much for such stellar feedback! I wasn't feeling too confident about writing wingfic altogether because it had been months since I ever read one, but as soon as I saw the prompt I needed to give in. Glad you liked the descriptions, they're what I'm most satisfied with here ;) and the wings have taste in drawing only Sayid, right?

Sure I am! And I'm completely loving it *sighs happily*!

[enamors]

Hi! This is finepanic. I just wanted to let you know that I switched journals. &hearts Add this new one?

[janie_tangerine]

Sure thing! ;) added and done ♥

[aboutbunnies]

I've never, ever read wingfic before, and I admit I was skeptical. But oh my. I'm hooked. This was beautiful. The descriptions - of Sawyer's pain, of the wings, of how Sayid feels them - wow. Just gorgeous.

And you know, I really have never been able to read and enjoy slash involving Sawyer. But this was just so wonderful, you just might have hooked me on Sawyer/Sayid, too. You're just that good!

[janie_tangerine]

Thank you so much for such an awesome comment! To be honest, I was completely scared about this one because I only read wingfic in Heroes and Supernatural, where is kind of easier to explain it and I didn't know whether I was going to pull it off. And if I made you buy Sawyer/Sayid I'm even happier, I so love it when it happens ;) thanks so much again, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!