Fic, Lost: Moments Have You (Jack/Sawyer), hard R or very light NC17, for inthekeyofd

Jul 11, 2008 12:28

Title: Moments Have You
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Word counting: 1300
Rating: hard R or very light NC17, your pick
Disclaimer: Not mine. Come on, if they were I'd be much richer than I am.
Spoilers: Nothing. And completely AU, so I don't know, they've been rescued before the S2 finale but after the poker game when they understood they were made for each ( Read more... )

luau fic, fanfiction:lost, character: james sawyer ford, character: jack shephard, pairing: jack/sawyer

Leave a comment

Comments 33

(The comment has been removed)

janie_tangerine July 11 2008, 12:09:23 UTC
What's with you and me posting fb at the same time? *smooch*

You don't know how this means to me really. Knowing you liked it even with your issues with the pairing and that you liked it makes me so really glad! I was sort of aiming for what you got out of it and since me + sex = still not too comfortable pair it's great that you found it so! And as soon as I read that prompt I figured that if I was going to go for plotless sex it was a nice way to vow that thing in ;) and I love the established couple scenario, too. Way less problems ;) thank you so much, you made my day! ;)

♥ ♥

Reply


inthekeyofd July 11 2008, 13:28:43 UTC
oh oh OH OH OH.

You hit all the bases including John. Excuse me while my brain melts, seriously, let's see, you have clean crisp sheets..BLACK AND WHITE, you have them slowly getting undressed, you have JACK TAKING HIS TIME WITH THOSE BACK DIMPLES...*whimper* Those freakin' dimples will be the death of me, I swear, if they loved their audience they'd have that man shirtless with low slung pants every damn episode..okay, sorry for that bit, I had to say it.

And you hit a kink button too..the handjob of one for another...and them kissing and just...*sigh*

The Majesty is very very very very pleased!!!!

Reply

janie_tangerine July 11 2008, 18:36:04 UTC
I'm so really glad this pleases Her Majesty! ♥ *bows*

I had to put the John title. I actually went, skimmed and took the one that suited best but I love that song too so no problem ;)

I'm really glad you appreciated my sheet device! And that back dimples thing has always been a half kink of mine. I mean, I'm sure that Mr. Ford has to be sensitive there. Totally. And I'm glad I hit the kink button there! I didn't know so even better ;) I'm really so glad you liked it! *smooch*

Reply


dustyirish2003 July 11 2008, 15:43:11 UTC
Oh my ... I think I may just have melted into a puddle of goo. *fans self madly*

Damn, girl - this was hot and quiet and sweet and all-around glorious. Thinking about back dimples should not have this kind of effect on me - lovely image, that. ; ) I could just see everything; the sheets, the bedroom layout, Sawyer's mussed but still-sexy hair, Jack taking his time, driving Sawyer mad ... fantastic.

Thanks so much for sharing this with us. : ) I can't believe how much wonderful fic you've been writing lately! How do you churn them out so fast and manage to make them all so amazing??! I wish to god I had that ability!

Reply

janie_tangerine July 11 2008, 18:38:24 UTC
*gives you a ventilator just in case*

Woah, I'm really glad you liked it! I have zero confidence with pwp so hearing this makes me so definitely happy, and yeah, back dimples -> VERY lovely image ;) Jack is a very nice person driving Sawyer mad that way, isn't it?

And don't flatter my ego, really. I just.. I don't know, these people inspire me. LOL. I don't know but I'm really so flattered. ♥ ♥

Reply


siluria July 11 2008, 16:34:41 UTC
Yay you!!!!!!! *happy sigh* Well I love it, and I'm sure the queen will too :D

Reply

janie_tangerine July 11 2008, 18:39:24 UTC
Thank you so much! And yay me and the queen for forcing me to write those two ;)

Reply


mrslinus17 July 11 2008, 17:01:50 UTC
That... was... amazing!

It was so hot, i totally need a cold shower now, damn you. You got the characters spot on.

LOVE this peice of dialouge:

damn fucking tease of an E.R. reject

Reply

janie_tangerine July 11 2008, 18:40:57 UTC
Go, go have that shower ;) thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it! And I'm definitely proud of that line. Yay Sawyer ;)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up