Dante kisses Nero graphically for one paragraph. I'm not sure if a graphic kiss counts as lemon, to be honest. Then it's implied that Nero and Kyrie get laid, but it's a PG fade-to-black 'and then...'
There is no hurry, the fic is not even finished yet ^^
I don't have your address, but I usually go with LJ for beta-reading. I post the fic in a filtered entry that only the beta-reader can see, then send them the link. Would that be ok for you?
Besides grammar, flow, characterization and humor, one of my biggest concerns is: can you tell easily who is Nero and who is Dante? I mean, I didn't want to always write "Nero and Dante this", "Nero and Dante that"; but both are silver-haired male demon hunters who wear red-ish leather and fight with swords and guns, so it was a bit difficult to come up with surrogate names and pronouns without getting them confused.
I didn't mean to sound pushy. I don't mind waiting, I just wanted confirmation that I was waiting for something. If you say "I'm going to get it done in a month", it's perfect. But if I never get any confirmation, I get the doubt that I'm waiting for nothing.
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Is that ok?
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Yeah, I'd be happy to beta read that for you. ^_^ Do you have my EMail address?
I'm about to head to bed, so if I don't reply to you immediately, I promise I'll get to it when I wake up. XD
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There is no hurry, the fic is not even finished yet ^^
I don't have your address, but I usually go with LJ for beta-reading. I post the fic in a filtered entry that only the beta-reader can see, then send them the link. Would that be ok for you?
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Most people I beta for just send me the file, so I just assumed. XD My bad. Sure, an entry is just fine.
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Yay! :D
Here is the link: http://janegray.livejournal.com/133872.html
Besides grammar, flow, characterization and humor, one of my biggest concerns is: can you tell easily who is Nero and who is Dante? I mean, I didn't want to always write "Nero and Dante this", "Nero and Dante that"; but both are silver-haired male demon hunters who wear red-ish leather and fight with swords and guns, so it was a bit difficult to come up with surrogate names and pronouns without getting them confused.
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I ask because springkink has started the new round, and I am trying to decide on a fanfiction timetable :)
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If you just decided that you don't want to beta-read for me anymore, please just tell me so, so that I can ask somebody else.
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I only JUST got these replies. Wow, I'm sorry. Man, LJ seriously spazzed or something...
Geez, I feel awful. I'm about to turn in, but I'm gonna read this before I do and say what I can.
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Don't worry, take your time :)
I didn't mean to sound pushy. I don't mind waiting, I just wanted confirmation that I was waiting for something. If you say "I'm going to get it done in a month", it's perfect. But if I never get any confirmation, I get the doubt that I'm waiting for nothing.
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