Harry/Draco, for Ronnie

[jamie_dakin]

Title: Whispers Of A Ewer To The River
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Harry/Draco (always a first time for everything...)
Rating: um, barely PG, I did try
A/N: From the israeli_slasher ICon challenge, for _bane who wanted Harry/Draco and a menorah. Sorry it took a bit, real life and whatnot... Ronnie dear, I've barely even read Harry/Draco before, much less written

Comments

[miarr]

Oh my god. This is... ineffable. You totally blew me away. O_O Wow. WOW! I'm speechless with awe.

I must say you won me over the minute you combined Jewish history and wizardry. I mean... genius. Pure genius. Giving the age-old Hannukah legend such an intriguing twist... I don't think I'll ever be able to look at this holiday the same way again (neither at Harry Potter). And your writing style is so rich and vertebrose; such sentences like

Of that same wizard years later in a rebuilt temple that would never smell of the old one with no tears running down his cheeks.

and

He thinks of Draco's skin sliding against his in the utter silence of his bedroom in Godric's Hollow. Of thin ice still crystallized over eyes he just now thinks he might see for real one day, of uncomfortably warm lips and the way Draco holds his breath in the impossible moments before he finally comes; messy and heated on Harry's stomach.

(especially the last line) and

Come dawn will the broken women and men of the Order not still find Harry with that white-

[jamie_dakin]

oh yay, I'm really happy you liked it oh she-who-is-goddess-of-kippa-slash... :)
I'm a bit unsure about x-posting it to HP coms, it still seems a bit off to me...

[miarr]

Oh, thtop. *giggles*

And I warmly urge you to x-post it wherever. It deserves to be widespread!

[_bane]

Omg, man.

Seriously, OMG is the only phrase befitting of this, because it simply beautiful.

You have such a way with words, man. This is far better than anything I thought ANYONE could come up with for my silly challange.

The way you tied everything in, and your (delicisously and wonderfully and VERY Harrily awesome) description of Harry's thoughts, feelings and random mind just... did me in. I love it, I love you, this is awesome.

*fangirls away*

[jamie_dakin]

thanks for the challenge dude, but what if now I've read my way through your rec list (of doom indeed) and am now craving some more intellislash (but for every half decent fic I find there are a dozen penned by retarded 12 year olds)? Any rec site suggestions?

[jamie_dakin]

yeah, the layout. Will eventually get around to fixing it properly... one more thing in which I can display my awe inspiring powers of procrastination :)

I'm glad you liked it, here's to many more sleep depriving posts says I...