Oh, this is so amazingly wonderful. I love the fact that it's a pattern that he falls into without noticing. I love the non-murder. I love the fact he still doesn't quit getting down on his knees, even when he's running his own 'firm'.
No not jumbled at all - I just speed read it. It is very good as it is. And the twins - I was going to write Sodom and Gommorah but they scare me and might beat me up. *g*
Honestly you guys, I think you missed a class or two on thanking etiquette - I'm the one who's playing in your sandbox here.
And oh, what a lovely sandbox it is. I re-read a few of my favorite chapters several times while I was writing this and just... my god, the love. I must know Sam's part of 'Truth and Consequences' by heart at this point.
So, onwards and forwards to the Anonymous Pornfest then. I still have time right?
It was shite, it was awful, HOW DARE YOU WRITE FANFIC OF OUR FANFIC AND VIOLATE OUR CREATIVE FEELINGS, YOU SLAG?
In other news, it was gorgeous, it was painful, we wish we could write as well, and I read through it again to digest each and every word and I'm even more gutwrenched now. (Not that I just skimmed it the first time, but I am a reader who has a "and what happened?" reaction, so I do try and go back to reread in case my brain got ahead of me.)
Oh dear, how ever shall I make up for my transgression to the Mistresses?
And I really do appreciate the wonderful feedback, especially coming from you (and I'm not just saying that in the hopes that you'll call me a slag again. Possibly an off-duty one with glitter in my hair?). What can I say, you guys just bring out the blushing fangirl in me sometimes...
I know, but you've done such a beautiful job of this. I mean, not only is it superbly written, but it seems like you've got inside our heads and pulled out the rest of the story.
So, thanks again. I *loved* it.
Well, you have until Valentine's Day for the anonymous bit. After that, we'll be letting the bunnies loose to wreak havoc wherever they may roam (as long as it's not our backyard!!)
I just adore it, period. Thanks so much!
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Think I'll have to re-read it to get the whole appreciation.
And high praise from the twins too!
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The twins eh? Hmm, that does have a certain ring to it...
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It is very good as it is.
And the twins - I was going to write Sodom and Gommorah but they scare me and might beat me up.
*g*
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Ah well, may as well go for the blasphemy bit too!
I will now wallow in my corruption!
*g*
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And oh, what a lovely sandbox it is. I re-read a few of my favorite chapters several times while I was writing this and just... my god, the love. I must know Sam's part of 'Truth and Consequences' by heart at this point.
So, onwards and forwards to the Anonymous Pornfest then. I still have time right?
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It was shite, it was awful, HOW DARE YOU WRITE FANFIC OF OUR FANFIC AND VIOLATE OUR CREATIVE FEELINGS, YOU SLAG?
In other news, it was gorgeous, it was painful, we wish we could write as well, and I read through it again to digest each and every word and I'm even more gutwrenched now. (Not that I just skimmed it the first time, but I am a reader who has a "and what happened?" reaction, so I do try and go back to reread in case my brain got ahead of me.)
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And I really do appreciate the wonderful feedback, especially coming from you (and I'm not just saying that in the hopes that you'll call me a slag again. Possibly an off-duty one with glitter in my hair?). What can I say, you guys just bring out the blushing fangirl in me sometimes...
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So, thanks again. I *loved* it.
Well, you have until Valentine's Day for the anonymous bit. After that, we'll be letting the bunnies loose to wreak havoc wherever they may roam (as long as it's not our backyard!!)
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