Title: Gymnopedie No.1
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leli_008Rating: R for m/m, mature themes and angst
Pairing: Frasier/Niles (oh shut up already...)
Summary:Sometimes life isn't perfect. Sometimes it doesn't need to be. Frasier thinks about his relationship with Niles. Frasier/Niles. WARNING - contains slash and mature themes.
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Gymnopedie No.1 )
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Well written, Explicably In Character. Not bad at all.
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I like your attention to detail and character, just for instance the mention of Frederic.
I was gonna say I would have written out that mention of Niles trying to define the relationship, but having read the whole fic I think it could have ruined its balance.
Go you! :)
Now write Martin! *eg*
(well, I'd like to read it, and at least two episodes come to mind in which he was thought to be gay, once with Niles and once with Duke).
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You mean.... you mean you saw the Niles thing too?
OMG, will you marry me?
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And I don't see a reason to impose moral values of "the way things should be" on a poor character who obviously feels differently from said way. Very 19th century.
OMG, will you marry me?
Hmm, will you write that in a form of a haiku?
;)
{hugs}
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Boo for social conformity...
which is why I love Weasleycest so very much, it's just so interesting to explore those relationships...
p.s. I suck at haiku's... how about I bribe you with endless promises of mindblowing sex and maybe some good chocolate?
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It's funny, I've been grooving on Niles & Frasier (It's practically twincest, isn't it?) for a while and yet never written anything . . . never knew *what*, ah, and Now I don't have to. Yay!
Seriously, I liked this. The telegraphic break-up of the sentences was very effective, gave the impression of someone thinking very slowly and deliberatly, trying to convince himself of something (the rightnes of what he's done) by laying out the arguements in a neat, logical order.
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And I'm glad! Very nice, very... real. For lack of better words. I'd love to see it from Niles' perspective.
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