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DA Fic - SEXY BACK - PG-15 (high T)

Aug 01, 2006 18:59

TITLE: SEXY BACK
Author: Dazedizzy
Rating: PG-15 (high Teens) just for imagery and UST
Pairing: Take a wild guess...
Summary: Alec falls in love...

DISCLAIMER: Dark Angel is not mine.

A/N: Inspired by the title of Justin Timberlake’s new song: “Sexy Back”, though not necessarily the lyrics.

Summary: Alec falls in love with Max.

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pairing: alec/max

Comments 6

mythverdandi August 2 2006, 20:55:11 UTC

Much as I loathe Justin Timberlake, I think I love this story just a little bit. After that description, I think I'm a little attracted to Max's back...

dazedizzy August 2 2006, 23:35:19 UTC

HAHAHAHA! Max has a very nice back...LOL! I hate the lyrics to the song, but I loved the title...hence...Sexy Back.

herowlness October 9 2006, 05:47:22 UTC

This was gorgeous. Short, sweet, to the point, but excellent all at the same time. I really loved the repetition of "It was her back" twice at the beginning, and a variation thereof at the end. Of course, I think it might have had more impact, had you ended the story with the something like:

Fuck.

It was her back.

Of course, that's more my writing style anyhow (the repetition, I mean), so I'm probably just trying to impress my own style on you, which .... no.

Thanks for this! :)

dazedizzy October 9 2006, 06:27:27 UTC

Thanks!

I actually like suggestions and stuff for my writing. But I opted to end with "Because of her sexy back"
because of the fic's title.

Hehehe....but I do see your point.

I appreciate the review!

she_1230 December 9 2006, 09:18:59 UTC

I hate the song, yes, and i know i don't like Jessica that much either, BUT this story made me kinda fall for her,too. All because of her back? Myyy, Alec and me - were indeed fucked!

Girl, you're ideas never cease to amaze me! BTW, since i'm here already - i just have to nag you about an UPDATE of your 'you-know-what' story...i need a good cry.

-she

dazedizzy December 9 2006, 10:14:22 UTC

awww...why do u need a good cry?

I'm not feeling very angsty lately...that's why...I've been busting with lots of romantic comedies, hehehe...it's just that I'm looking for some romance in my life these days...heheh

Identical only has one chapter to go...not so angsty either. I only have one page written...just cuz...uh...i don't know how to end it. HAHAHAHHAA!

thanks, btw, for the comments both here and at NWP. I'm happy to make entertain you! I hope that your muse gets nudged by the stories!

Salamat, Ate!!!