Fic: On the Knees of My Heart (Jon/Daenerys, M)

[jal80]

Title: On the Knees of My Heart
Pairing: Jon/Daenerys
Fandom: ASoIaF
Rating:M
Notes: honey_wheeler wanted Jon  to do some banner calling on Daenerys, and while I'd intended it to be a short, sexy wee fic, these two freaks ended up having all these ~FEELS~ and it turned into this 4K+ monster of a FEELS FIC. *iinsert appropriate "I REGRET NOTHING" gif here*
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[luna_plath]

I don't always capslock, but when I do, IT'S BECAUSE OF AMAZING THINGS JUST LIKE THIS. IN OTHER WORDS, PERFECTION.

Now that I've told you how I really feel, lol.

I love that this is from Dany's POV, that Jon is always polite/distant from her because she's a queen and he has honor, that he thinks she's almost as stubborn as Arya. I just have so many feelings about the way you did this. Pretty much all of those feelings are joy.

The language you used in this piece is gorgeous. And the way Dany keeps Jon from leaving, his sword belt falling, the way you described his eyes--*shivers* Even when both characters were holding themselves back you could see they have chemistry.

I know that so many people don't like the idea of this pairing because it borders on a fairytale ending, well, I'm not one of those people. I love the idea of Jon and Dany together and I love the way you portrayed it. His allegiance to her makes sense in this situation.

It makes sense that she would go to the Wall with her dragons; Dany cares about her people. I like that you added the "mount to love" prophecy, because form the moment I read that (along with the blue rose) I thought of Jon Snow.

Okay. Now my life is complete. Thanks for making it happen :D

[jal80]

Aw, this comment makes my day! Thank you!! I'm PRETTY sure Dany/Jon will happen in canon (at least, it really seems to be leading that way), and I too get why not everyone digs it, but WHATEVS I JUST WANT THEM TO BE HAAAPPPPPPY. And have hot sex, obviously. :)