the portrait of complicity

[interviewing]

                Edward moves his left elbow backward, his umber eyes staring into Jacob’s. He’s already on his back, his clothing torn to shreds in sporadic parts of the forest they’ve ensnared themselves within. His body, cool and white as snow, is motionless, his legs only slightly parted. Anger and fear and lust are the only things he can think

Comments

[havens]

Heh. That was very good. I loved the details and the imagery that appeared in my head. What a lovely thing to see.

[boundary]

This was breathtakingly perfect. You captured the characters so well and kept a dynamic which a lot of people skew to suit their interests.

I really, really loved it. I do hope you write more! <3

[loveme_obscene]

Guh... that was sooo hot! The intensity between the two is perfect! And oh how I love dom!Jacob. :) Thank you!

[vampireslure08]

...Whoa...I'm speechless...it..was...AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!