"tonight, lessons from luanda."
i write poetry, im not very good, if i write randomly it can be okay, but when i try to rhyme it blows like this one, but i didnt have anywhere else to put this one, so i put it here, maybe you will like it, maybe you will be like laura lee, and not comment at all, and say you will. maybe its good and i dont care, maybe the end of the world will come tonight while im typing this, maybe maybe maybe, that is why i have no confidence in people, that is why i keep my real feelings locked away. maybe maybe maybe.
bye bye.
(((overly perpetuating these deceptive lies,)))
(((every night, my heart lays out and cries,)))
(((rivers may flow, and oceans may break,)))
(((i must give up my ways for your sake,)))
(((tear at these arms, to remove your name,)))
(((this permanent black ink is all to blame,)))
(((incentives inside, into the night i ride)))
(((as if my blood would wash out in the sea,)))
(((seperating the leaves from this tree,)))
(((let the dead fall, let the living remain,)))
(((fill your ears with this wonderful sustain,)))
(((you are my always, let me regain my balance,)))
(((let my steady hand become your guidence,)))
(((timeless treasures, my memories are gone,)))
(((forgotten days of yesteryear i come undone,)))
(((lest we become the dreaded past we hate,)))
(((with hearts on sleeves, we clean the slate,)))
(((begin anew, second chances hold hope,)))
(((i hold on, motivation, drive, you're my rope,)))
(((this story's for you to end, end it with haste)))
(((with lots of love, none to waste...)))
(((my fate is that of your heart's)))
[jake]tucker
p.s. lauren, this poem does not contain a purple star.
bye bye.
(((overly perpetuating these deceptive lies,)))
(((every night, my heart lays out and cries,)))
(((rivers may flow, and oceans may break,)))
(((i must give up my ways for your sake,)))
(((tear at these arms, to remove your name,)))
(((this permanent black ink is all to blame,)))
(((incentives inside, into the night i ride)))
(((as if my blood would wash out in the sea,)))
(((seperating the leaves from this tree,)))
(((let the dead fall, let the living remain,)))
(((fill your ears with this wonderful sustain,)))
(((you are my always, let me regain my balance,)))
(((let my steady hand become your guidence,)))
(((timeless treasures, my memories are gone,)))
(((forgotten days of yesteryear i come undone,)))
(((lest we become the dreaded past we hate,)))
(((with hearts on sleeves, we clean the slate,)))
(((begin anew, second chances hold hope,)))
(((i hold on, motivation, drive, you're my rope,)))
(((this story's for you to end, end it with haste)))
(((with lots of love, none to waste...)))
(((my fate is that of your heart's)))
[jake]tucker
p.s. lauren, this poem does not contain a purple star.