By request-ish

[ratzels]

Disclaimer:  Jak and Daxter and all related incidentals belong solely to Naughty Dog Inc.  I’m just playing with them.

“I was right.”

“Shut up.”

“He was right.”

“Can it!”  Jinx quickened his pace even further.

“Admit it, I was right.”

“Mog.  Shut.  The fuck.  Up.”

“But he was right.”  Grim turned to the other man.  “You

Comments

[nirvana_seiga]

*beams* Squee! Yay you did do a sequal-like thingy! And it was better than I could've thought! It was very snazzy! And Jak stealing Daxter's line... This was definately what I needed after a long few days of camping out in the rough.

^_^

[ratzels]

I'm very glad it made you happy. :)

I'm glad you didn't think the stolen line was OOC. I felt it was borderline, but enjoyed that bit enough to leave it in.

Overall I feel that this piece is... disconnected, but, oh well. If it makes somebody smile, that's worth it.