Moar fic

[ratzels]

Disclaimer:  Jak and Daxter and all related incidentals belong solely to Naughty Dog Inc.  I’m just playing with them.

“What do you know about the new guy?”

“Never met him.  Heard lots of rumors, though.”  Grim spat dismissively.

“Like what?  And what’s his name?” Mog persisted.

“Name’s Jak,” Jinx said.  “I’ve heard some bizarre

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[nirvana_seiga]

^^ I could never decide which was which (between Grim and Mog) so as far as you go, I think it's just fine.

So... I liked it. Even if it was rather short. Second part, possibly? Where Jak knocks all their ideas into the nasty sewers?

[ratzels]

I picked Grim as the slow-talking, stereotypically stupid-sounding one, and assigned Mog the role of the guy with thirty-kilos of explosives on his back. No idea if that's correct.

Do you really think this needs a second part? I'm not averse to the notion if it truely seems lacking, but it seems that we all already know what happens after that and what rumors are confirmed/debunked.

Thanks for reviewing, either way.

[nirvana_seiga]

Sounds good. No matter which you choose.

Well, not sure if there needs to be a second part. But I'm in Jak/Jinx slashy mode at the moment so I saw potential here. But, you probably weren't even thinking of slashing them. Or even if slash was your cup of tea. It just seems that the way it ends, "here comes Pretty Boy..." you kinda left it dangling, even though that leads straight in the canon game verse.

Whichever comes out, nothing or a sequal, it's your work.

[chyroptera]

Krew didn’t hire no demon.

This cracked me up. I haven't seen a fic fill in this little piece of canon before. Nice idea!

[ratzels]

Heh, according to the double negative rule, Krew did hire a demon. :D

[chyroptera]

It ain't ain't ain't not good!

[meowen]

Great dialogue, eagerly waiting for next part if there is any! =)

[crackedkatana]

You never see anybody write much for any of these guys- it's good to see people spreading the love. ^^ I've never seen anyone try to fill this plothole before, actually...great job! Very in-character.

Personally, I can never decide who's who in terms of Grim and Mog, but I absolutly love Jinx. (I need to write him more, myself.)