Kanjani8: "Promises" (Ryo/Uchi)

Feb 14, 2008 22:55

Title: Promises
Author: Jain
Pairing: Ryo/Uchi
Rating: G
Word count: 1583
Summary: It's been years since Uchi's gotten homemade chocolates.
Author's notes: Written for the 24 Hour Valentine's Day Challenge.

Other participants: acchikocchi | agirlcalledkil | anamuan | devetir | honooko | imwahyou | iverin | jackoweskla | jadedfrenzy | jnessap | Read more... )

fic: j-pop, fic

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procreational February 15 2008, 05:03:36 UTC
oh my GOD how is every single thing you write so amazing and perfect.

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jain February 16 2008, 05:50:00 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for the comment--and for making me blush again. :-)

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bloodybrilliant February 15 2008, 05:33:32 UTC
OMG MY HEART.

This. lskdfjlsdkjflsdkfjdslfkjsd WOW this is so WONDERFUL and ITS RYOUCHI and PERFECTLY SWEET AND LOVELY RYOUCHI AND LSKDFJSLKFJD YOU SHOULD ALWAYS WRITE MORE RYOUCHI OMG OMG OMG

♥!!!

I am all teary and OH RYO ;_; he was so aslkdfja his day. saldkf poor Ryo and Uchi thinking it was Yasu LOL and god. So perfect.

The fact that there was a small, stupid part of him that had hoped the chocolates might have come from someone else only made it worse, and the combination of worry and disappointment twisted painfully in Uchi's stomach.
<3<3<3 OH UCHI <3333

He held his breath after he'd finished speaking, knowing exactly how he would feel if Ryo agreed that that was a good idea. Somehow, that never made him stop making these sorts of suggestions. He wasn't sure if that made him a good friend or a masochist, or maybe just an idiot.

UCHIUCHIUCHIUCHIUCHIUCHIUCHI!!!!!! FLAIL

Yasu said he delivered the chocolates. We don't have to talk about it if you don't want. Sorry if I made things awkward.RYOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SOB ( ... )

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jain February 16 2008, 09:44:17 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! You can't know how pleased I was to see this and to read how much you enjoyed the story. I have to say that boys angsting is one of my favorite things to write; I'm really glad that it worked for you here. Happy belated Valentine's Day!

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bloodybrilliant February 17 2008, 00:21:56 UTC
:D You do such a great job with boys angsting! :D

Happy belated Valentine's Day to you too!

...>.> I'm going to friend you IF THAT'S OK <.< I should've done it already. *fails* XDDD

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jain February 24 2008, 03:15:11 UTC
Of course it's okay! Friending you back right now.

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thawrecka February 15 2008, 05:34:20 UTC
This is so lovely. ♥ This is just perfect Ryo and Uchi and, oh, my heart.

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jain February 16 2008, 05:54:20 UTC
Thank you! I was so nervous while writing it, because it's sappy Valentine's Day fic in which Ryo gives Uchi chocolate, but I just kept reminding myself that it couldn't possibly be worse than 99% of the Ryo/Uchi that gets written in this fandom, and that allowed me to keep going. I'm really glad that you liked it.

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4_03_am February 15 2008, 06:02:58 UTC
I'm not even into RyoUchi but I read this after bloodybrilliant recced it to me, and God, this was so lovely. Amazing.

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jain February 16 2008, 05:55:36 UTC
Thank you! It's really wonderful to hear that you liked it despite not caring for the pairing all that much.

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acchikocchi February 15 2008, 07:03:24 UTC
what the 4_03_am said. i'm not even into ryo/uchi and oh my god, SO ADORABLE AND WONDERFUL. ;______;♥

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jain February 16 2008, 07:15:47 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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