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Essay

Dec 12, 2005 22:51

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shadaraz December 13 2005, 04:51:03 UTC

oh so true... for a class or just for fun?

jaiken December 13 2005, 05:56:10 UTC

for my english class, i'm going to be writing one for fun soon though. i'll post it when it's done

a little edit job fsubaldchick December 13 2005, 08:11:42 UTC

if it's for class it should be ( ... )

Re: a little edit job fsubaldchick December 13 2005, 08:12:30 UTC

oh yeah, and you may want to spell out words like it's and you're and isn't, but then I don't know how your teacher/professor grades

lychii87 December 14 2005, 00:46:02 UTC

heehee, I like it. has that joyful sarcastic touch. ^_^ kudos.

flatinlondon February 7 2006, 06:04:07 UTC

I really liked this piece. The flowing of the sarcasm and serious points was perfectly intertwined. Who knew being a comic book geek was so complex? I suppose you can never judge a comic by it's cover 8-). Although very interesting..these rules are too challenging for joslin..joslin requires showers...BUT doesen't mind reading comics :)