J[a]e•lous•y [completed]

[shu_jaesu]

title: Jaelousy Epilogue
pairing: Jaesu
rating: r
genre: drama
length: 2037 words, [completed]

summary: Jaejoong has it bad for quite a few years and one day he decides that he's had enough. He has a plan... but it all goes so spectacularly wrong.

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Comments

[wrtchdexistence]

Hi Shu, love your JaeSu, always have. Going through a rough patch at work today but right after work I saw your post. I am so thankful for the story. Hugs & kisses~~~ it really brightened up my day. Jaejoong and Junsu are so sweet and I am like oh-can-so-imagine-these-two-doing-all-these-things. A nice story is a great motivation. Did Junsu love Jaejoong all along or after Jaejoong confessed? He was with all these girls and yet he accepted Jaejoong's confession with such ease. Such a curious man~

[shu_jaesu]

thanks, sweetheart^^ Stay strong and all shall be well! I hope you feel much happier :)
I'm glad you can imagine them in the moments, Jaesu are cute together, aren't they ^_-
That's a very good question, what do you think?
I think I don't want to limit the story to one end, I'll leave it up to each individual who can decide for themselves whether Junsu was also in love with Jaejoong from the beginning or whether he fell in love with him after the confession.
Thanks for your nice comment!

[wrtchdexistence]

LOL~ now I know the real reason behind Junsu's bout of flu. Re-reading it, I think even if Junsu is in love with Jaejoong before his hyung's confession, he was totally oblivious to his own feelings. Regardless he does love his hyung a lot since he accepted him so readily! I love both of them & I love you too for writing such nice stories about them~~

[shu_jaesu]

lol that with Junsu's flu is a total coincidence, I hope he get's well soon though ^^ You came up with a very good answer there! Thank you for all your love, I'll try to keep writing about them<3

[songbird52317]

This was absolutely lovely! My two favorites together. I love how you wove all the real life events together. You and I have similar reasons for why Jaejoong didn't see Elizabeth. Thanks for writing this!

[shu_jaesu]

Thank you so much^^ Glad you loved it! We do? haha
It was my pleasure writing this :)

[songbird52317]

Here's a link to a drabble I wrote 1/19/14. http://songbird52317.livejournal.com/4602.html You might see some similarities. There's a couple of follow-up drabbles as well.

[shu_jaesu]

I just read your story and now I know what you mean haha ^^ There are indeed similarities, and your story was very nice :) I'm glad the Jaesu events are stimulating people to write fanfics about them, it's so rare we get Jaesu fics anyway.

[weerainbow]

I could cry with how perfect this is Shu!!! I have happy tears in my eyes and I'm trying to slow down my heart so I can type lol I feel a little light headed myself ;)

What a perfect ending though. I love the honesty of Junsu's “I might be loving you, too.” so much, and I could feel it just as much in the way he acted. There was something there in his eyes, in the way he looked at Jaejoong and gently pulled himself closer and closer. sdmdfskjdsm I'm losing the words to describe all I loved about it, I'm a bit emotional now...but I could feel something of a culmination of all their years together coming together in the way they were on this night. I love that Junsu cared that Jaejoong was sick but didn't care that he could be infected by him because he wanted to express his heart. And I loved how Jae reacted at first by worrying that Junsu shouldn't get so close, first because of his cold and then because of his body's reaction to having him so physically close...but Junsu knew what he was doing and was very deliberate with every move

[shu_jaesu]

Aww, thank you, bb! I hope you didn't cry too much ;_;
I'm pleased you like the ending, you know your opinion means a lot to me. Yeah, I think Jaejoong and Junsu's relationship would be a very caring one, glad you liked that part^^ To be honest I haven't thought that far in the story but that's a very happy thought indeed to think of them snuggling in bed after. I'm also glad Jaejoong's character got happy end after all the suffering^^ Thank you so much again, bb! and you're very welcome♥♥♥

[lamerk]

jaesu what are you doing to me

[shu_jaesu]

aw it's my pleasure :) thank you, sweetie! I'm glad the long writing is paying off and makes it worth it ^^

[n3uromanc3r]

Ooooh this was beautiful!
I really liked the characterization, the interaction between all of them and simply how you described Jaejoong's feeings for Junsu!

It was so sweet how drunk and affectionate Jae continuously abashed Junsu and despite all Jae's efforts to confess Junsu didn't really take his words seriously!

I have to admit I didn't really expect happy ending, I just thought Junsu will reject him at the end when he realizes Jae is in dead earnest, so when he returned to Jae's apartment and hugged him from behind I felt as surprised as Jaejoong himself!

Thank you for the wonderful story, I enjoyed it so much!

[shu_jaesu]

Thank you, glad you liked it^^ Haha, Junsu can be thick sometimes. To be honest, I was also wavering between a sad and a happy ending at the beginning, but at the balcony scene I decided Junsu should return and make a twist. You're welcome and thanks again for the nice comment!