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A Better Tomorrow

Oct 12, 2011 12:32

Title: A Better Tomorrow
Pairing: JaeMin
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: Angst, Romance
Summary: With possibly only six months left to live, Changmin enlists the aid of his best friend Jaejoong to help him complete the one thing he wants to do before he dies- fall in love

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Spot for the birthday girl jaejoong October 12 2011, 04:39:50 UTC

Spot for Elo ^^
Hope you enjoy it~

Re: Spot for the birthday girl museelo October 12 2011, 06:20:26 UTC

... i act read it lol XDD

will comment later though :3 <33333333

Re: Spot for the birthday girl museelo October 12 2011, 21:24:27 UTC

OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH. IT WAS AMAZING AND OSM AND THANK YOU. <33

AND AND OMG I SPOT MINHO THERE. WELL DONE. BESIDES YOU SAID GOOD THINGS ABOUT HIM AND THANK VERY MUCH LOL

I really like jaemin's closeness as best friends they really are osm together :")

haha it kind of frustrates me to know that it's an open ending LOL honestly, what did you think about? that min was going to die or not? o:
personnally, i think he should die. i mean, 20% is really little .___.

THANK YOU SO MUCH AGAIN ;;
HERE THIS IS FOR YOU. <3

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dulanis October 12 2011, 06:03:48 UTC

Awwwwww......... you left us at a cliffhanger. But it was great. Would you write a sequel? Great wriitng....

tarwen_xoxo October 12 2011, 06:37:48 UTC

long jaemin long enough to finally get together!
i wish they were able to confess their feelings for one another earlier...

hhazellee October 12 2011, 06:39:07 UTC

this is beautiful :)
i'm glad it's ended there, at least i can come up with my own ending like the surgery is a success and jaemin live happily ever after.. :D

tahoeturquoise October 12 2011, 09:53:01 UTC

Lovely story!

Of course, being the kind who prefers hopeful/happy endings, I think they're going to get their miracle and be able to push each other's faces into the cake unti they are ninety!