Round 1, Challenge #1: "a faint reflection on the sea"

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Title: a faint reflection on the sea
Rating: PG
Word Count: 984
Summary: When JaeJoong backs away, YunHo's lips are tinted red, his eyes wide, a streak of white across one razor sharp cheekbone. His lips are parted, glittering, and when he closes them, swallows, he can taste other men on his lips.
Warnings: hints at prostitution, angst

Comments

[mickey8]

this reminds me so much of the one YunJae fic i used to read quite some time ago... a close replica to 'Memoirs of Geisha'... it's beautiful, amongst all the broken hopes. ♥

[ara_niey]

beautiful~♥

[lilxinyue]

*stares* ah~! ara_niey read my mind =]

[tyreling]

Nice. There's a lot of description surrounding the image of Jaejoong looking almost exotic in the kimono, while Yunho is trying to say goodbye (?) or something. In the end, the story still turned out sad and bittersweet at the same time. I like the mention of the fish. :D

[chloe1910]

lovely...