So Much Mine: Section Seventeen

[wedspawn]

Section Seventeen
NOTE: I will not be updating on Thursday. I am in charge of cooking for Thanksgiving. Please plan accordingly. :::grins:::

Pairing: JaeHo
Rating: Overall NC-17. This section has a few naughty words. No lemons.
Cotton candy and lavender bunnies provided by: RanaloreSummary: The beginning of a shifting relationship. Hot Korean boys. Sex.

Comments

[hosoi_koe]

FIRST!?

[hosoi_koe]

HAH. *saves and reads* I love you.

[hosoi_koe]

Wow! Very well written! I could just -feel- how cold they were!

Loving it more and more, if possible!

[wedspawn]

thank you... i hope you liked it. ♥♥♥ i know it doesn't have smex but i need the courtship :D thank you for reading!

[pudding_egoiste]

Wee! Second! O.O I caught it early!

[pudding_egoiste]

"You can hear them scream when you bite." I love the morbidity of that.

Evil random college students. I have the urge to yell "Oh, knockdown, bitch!"

Chestnuts roasting on an open fire~~~

This one was lighthearted and fun. Very cute. I especially enjoyed the scene at the end. XD I'm extremely curious to see how you play out the smut. It will probably kill me.

I reiterate: I bow to you and your writing skills.

<3

[wedspawn]

why thank you! oh you are too sweet! ♥♥♥♥

i figured peeling chestnuts and opening the membrane for jae to bite into would be a good simile for...other things. :D

and i wanted a bit of lighthearted...only a shred of angst... but good for the soul. D

thank you for reading! again. still! ♥♥♥♥

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥ i ended up posting early. i hope you like it! :::crosses fingers: ♥♥♥

[audient]

YOU POSTED EARLY TODAY DSKHAFKLJDHLKSJHDLGK!!!

[audient]

“Maybe they’ll fall into the river and we’ll have to share a cup of hot tea while the firemen rescue them.”

...ROFL. and this: “They squeak when you eat them. You can hear them scream when you bite.”

...Is it just me or was that a sex reference? >> *cough*

I enjoyed the conversation between Jae and YooChun, though :3 especially because Chun sounded wise and cheeky at the same time XD like the kill-YunHo plan. Ahahahahahah. Your portrayal of Su was interesting XD And I love how you write so close to home about the homosexuality issue in Korea. Cause yeah. I ran across a discussion yesterday and was faced with the harsh reality and all that. Things we don't see so often in fanfics. It's refreshing, your writing :]

aaaand, slight mistake on the html tag on this: But the rest of the world… can I face that? Can he?YunHo's reaction to the college students, though, was o_____O (although unbearably chivalric and omg ♥ yes) and his little scene with JaeJoong... x_x I was mildly surprised that none of those people recognized the boys. I

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥ thank you! ♥♥♥ su was well, flittering about today... i am not sure what got into him. i'll have to settle him down. :)

chun is wise and cheeky :) and yes, i did need to show the truth of being gay ... there is a lot of... angst that they have to overcome in order to love one another... i didn't want to gloss over that.

thank you for the tag catch...i was cutting and pasting code as i typed. probably not the best of things to do :D

i am going to say that no one was looking :) after all, sometimes...no one is looking :::Grins::: chestnuts...yeah :)

♥♥♥ thank you for reading! ♥♥♥ i hope you like the next sections.

[tea_biscuit]

*squeaks* glad i'm not the only one who that that screaming chestnut line was a tad...scandolous *pinches jae's cheeks* oooh boojae, you saucy wench, you! ^_____^

[bellasurus]

LALALAA

[bellasurus]

NYAHAHAHAHAHA *giggles and rolls around madly* this was so zomg SWEEEEET. yunjae. and marshmallow jaejae! XDD

and hot. gah. chestnuts. i hate chestnuts, but gah. that was hot. and silly college boys wanting jae. he's not for sale 8D he belongs to yunnie!

make them jump each other alreadyyyyyyyyyyy TTT___TTT

and whut, no update on thursday?!?! *counts on fingers* that makes it my friday, i think :x it's wed morning here now o.O but nooooo, i won't have distraction from jaejoongie case...;_;

[wedspawn]

yeah, i don't much care for chestnuts either... :) or roses :) :::Grins::: but hell, jae apparently does. :)

no jumping one another. i do have other things planned. :) i promise. and we have to take things slow. they need to explore.

thursday will be spend cooking thanksgiving dinner... the turkey is already purchased and there's other stuff :::grins::: so cooking over jaeho... i'm sorry :) but friday will be there :D

i am glad you liked it. ♥♥♥♥ and yes, it is a marshmallow jaejae :)

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥♥ isn't that one of the teletubbies? :::grins::::

[helloviola]

Yay! I'm in the top 10 for once! Will comment again after I read =)

[helloviola]

Ooooh, this chapter made me hungry for some chestnuts teehee. As always, you've done an amazing job describing everything in detail and I just felt so warm reading this. I wanted to slap those college students for what they said and I could feel my blood boil but Yunho said exactly what I hoped he would and I calmed down haha. Yoochun is so protective of Jae, I love it!

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥ thank you for reading this fluffier piece :::grins::: and i hope you liked it :) chestnuts aside :)

and yes, the college students did help firm up yunho's convictions. he will have a hard time separating from jaejoong :) :::Grins::: so very jealous.

and yes, yoochun is very protective of jae. so that's always a good thing too!

thank you again for reading! ♥♥♥

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥♥ yay! i hope you like it! ♥♥♥♥