chills (gwangchul/injoon)

[jaedragon]

chills
xing; gwangchul/injoon
pg; 1583 words
for yeonga ♥ sorry you weren't around for the last one, bb. D:

Comments

[hobutt]

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

[hobutt]

Oh god I was so scared for half a second. I thought you were going to end it sadly and my heart seriously did something funny. ;~~; That was so beautiful, and so, so natural. You write these two so believably, it's incredible. All of their interactions are really smooth and natural.

YOU MAKE ME LOVE GWANGJOON.

[jaybomb]

I THOUGHT SO TOO, ACTUALLY. idk what it is, but I think this is the pairing I feel the most comfortable writing...even though they give me anxiety b/c I am never sure if I'm characterizing them properly. ;~; Which is weird.

[yeonga]

THIS IS ME SAVING A SPOT. BRB READING AWESOME. SO EXCITED ;~;

[yeonga]

;~~~~~~~; BRB CRYING. Well not literally, but right now my heart is all fluttery and stuff. LOL. I was scared this was going to end tragically, BUT GOOD JOB INJOON. ♥

& HOLY CRAP THAT WAS AMAZING. I LOVE YOUR FIC WRITING, LIKE SERIOUSLY. :'D YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY THIS FIC HAS MADE ME TONIGHT. ;___; ♥ IDK WHAT TO SAY ANYMORE. i'm like so touched. :'D

I LOVE YOU, YOU INJOON TO MY GWANGCHUL :'D

[jaybomb]

DON'T CRY. ;__; And lol It definitely had the potential to be tragic but uwgbgr I CANNOT END THINGS...SADLY.

NOT AMAZING but I'm really really happy you liked it ♥

[yeonga]

If you ended it tragically, i think i would have legit cried. LOL.

IT IS AMAZING. kthx.

[fingeredheart]

...I feel like I shouldn't have the privilege of ajkdls;fa'ing at you because I don't know these people. BUT. just a few things, okay.

I love love love the tiny detailed contrast between Gwangchul's communication with Junyeon and Injoon (omg I had to scroll up to find/spell the names lmao what sorry :|) but sjkdlf how for Junyeon it was just texting and a nonchalant response, but obviously when you introduce Injoon it's something just that bit...more. I love the cold hugs because it's such a small imperfection but it makes it all the better, all the more natural because some people just hug awkwardly and not all warm and squishy (lol or I am just saying this because I cannot give out good hugs, at all...)

He's surprised to see Injoon standing in the doorway, but says nothing, only stares and blinks. "I'm going back to sleep."laughed at this part. I know nothing about these people, but I'm going to assume this is in relation to the quirks of Gwangchul's character. cute

[jaybomb]

iofgbuerog you can...read anything you want to LOL T___T

SEE THAT COLD HUGS THING WAS SOMETHING GWANGCHUL SAID IN AN INTERVIEW ONCE SO IT'S NOT LIKE...RANDOM BS.

Um well. SURE. Gwangchul has more personality when less people are looking at him...that makes no sense at all.

your coherency is my favorite ): And it means a lot to me that you read this even though you don't know them. really ♥ YOU INSPIRE ME!

[frequency]

YOU TOLD ME ON TWITTER THAT YOU DON'T WRITE GOOD

YOU'RE SUCH A LIAR, JAY

[jaybomb]

WHAT.

[frequency]

I SEE NOTHING BAD HERE

[jaybomb]

;___; ty.

[raenism]

okay so i'm finally in a proper enough mental/health state that i can read and comment on this !!

;~; every time you write them, it's just so gorgeous. i can't even explain it...maybe it's your writing but just, you could write about the simplest thing and make it sound so beautiful. and sfnksjs you have a way about writing them that i don't think i could read anyone else write about them. i don't know. just, you're amazing okay. ♥

[jaybomb]

T___T Rae your comments always make my face red. EMBARRASSMENT OMG why are you so nice. This is only my second time writing them though. ;~; ♥