Hey Everyone. I tried to post this last week, but frankly, I kept fucking up the link.
My husband just started posting original fiction is wondering if someone (other than me) could give it a look. His LJ is here. The link is to his first story. It's about 3, 500 words.
http://stewardofxuanwu.livejournal.com/542.html#cutid1 I would greatly appreciate it if any of you would be willing to give him feedback.
Thanks.