I Will Be Your Undoing: Key

[jaded_fiction]

2: Key

When her bed is lonely and the night is long, it is still his face she sees when she touches herself in the dark. It’s his body pressed against hers. His breath against her neck, warm and possessive. It is his bluest eye looking at her-looking into her-memorizing the contours of a face he already knows by heart. It is his

Comments

[omnomnom17]

Wow. This is just stunning and heartbreaking and just about exactly how I've always imagined Carol to be in South Africa. Just perfect- damn you for making me cry!

[jaded_fiction]

Needless to say, it's how I imagined it, too. :) Thanks so much, again, for the feedback. It helps to keep me writing.

[tiredmomof2]

That was perfect!! Excellent story. Totally in character. Great job!

[krazykitkat]

*sniff*

And I love 'she remembers what effortless chemistry feels like'.

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