Comments | jade_starlight: Fic: One More Cup of Coffee, part four

jade_starlight

Fic: One More Cup of Coffee, part four

Oct 07, 2007 20:45

Title: One More Cup of Coffee
Previous Parts: Part One, Part Two, Part Three

( Part Four )

Comments 12

jabber_moose October 8 2007, 02:41:31 UTC

good...god...

I have...no words. mem mem memememem mem. Absolutely...stunning...and worth any wait.

Just...breathless. Your ability to keep them in character even under such pressure was just..perfect. Not overly done, but thorough and well thought out...so...perfect.

*Standing ovation*

jade_starlight October 8 2007, 02:47:29 UTC

*blushes* I'm glad you liked it, and somewhat relieved that you thought that they stayed in character through the whole thing. I was a little worried about that in the latter bits, so I'm really glad that it worked for you. *g*

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jade_starlight October 8 2007, 03:11:32 UTC

You can't do that to Tony

And yet, somehow I did.... *eg*

I'm so glad that you liked it, and that you thought they stayed in character. With characters as unique as Tony and Control that's always difficult, so I'm glad to know that it worked. *g*

zekkass October 8 2007, 03:34:01 UTC

Oh wow. It's over.

I think I died several times during it and came back.

Excellent, in character, and it read like a good spy-thriller. :D

*boing!* I am so very glad this is finally. finally. done. :D

jade_starlight October 8 2007, 03:43:37 UTC

*sighs in relief* I'm so glad that it lived up to its hype. *g* And I'm thrilled that everyone so far seems to really like it. It makes me feel a lot better, as I was a bit nervous when I posted it.

zekkass October 8 2007, 03:48:05 UTC

It did! You kept them in character, and what more can I ask you for? :D

marginaliana October 8 2007, 18:03:01 UTC

Oh, a very satisfying ending! I have to admit I was waiting for Robert to come back, and I cringed (in a good way!) through that whole scene. Very suspenseful and brilliantly done.

jade_starlight October 8 2007, 18:13:43 UTC

Thanks, I'm really glad that you liked it and that the ending worked for you. *g*

soupymonina October 11 2007, 16:08:29 UTC

That was brilliant! I loved Control #2/Oversight, the whole thing read like a mystery novel, the images were very strong, excellent story!

jade_starlight October 11 2007, 17:44:27 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. *g* Oversight just sort of popped into my head when I was writing it, and I decided that he'd make a perfect villain. It's good to know that he worked out like I hoped he would. *g*