Exit Strategy Chapter 7

Oct 28, 2010 01:37


Title: Exit Strategy, Ch 7
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Humor, romance, (slight) angst, fluff
Pairings: jock!US/school president!UK
Warning: Language, Arthur's brothers, Alfred's mind going places
Summary: High school AU. It all started with Arthur snapping when he'd been fed up with Alfred's stupid teasing. And now....now he can't help but think he's signed ( Read more... )

us/uk, exit strategy, hetalia, au, fanfiction

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plextral October 28 2010, 09:06:00 UTC
MORE ARTHUR'S BROTHERS <3 I am ridiculously infatuated with them, seriously. Haha, poor Alfred, having them as future brother-in-laws? 8DD

Ffft, Mexico as the adopted sister, what a little terror xD You have to feel sorry for Matthew for having to mediate between the two of them.

DO I SPY FUTURE CAR SEX? I am also going to pretend that there was foreshadowing of Alfred bringing Arthur home for sexy fun times. And then Mexico walking in on them. Her poor lucky innocent eyes ( ... )

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jade_rzeznic October 28 2010, 19:02:51 UTC
Mom and Dad weren't hom and somebody's gotta do it, right? Even if they'll deny being protective until their dying day. XD

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earthdiva_x October 28 2010, 09:56:39 UTC
Another great chapter as always.

And the Maria/México bit? Hahahahahaha....ha. Ouch, that hit a nerve. :S

Anyways, other than that, good work. This series is always a pleasure to read.

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jade_rzeznic October 28 2010, 19:01:36 UTC
I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to offend! Really, Maria is more an excuse to give Al hell from one of his siblings than she is an accurate representation of Mexico. Being an AU, it's all told from Alfred's perspective as an annoyed older brother, not a country. More than anything, she's modelled after my own sister. I think a legit representation of Mexico would take way longer for me to think about before being comfortable writing her.

I hope you enjoyed the rest of the chapter! ^^;

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earthdiva_x October 28 2010, 23:30:40 UTC
Oh, don't worry about it. It's one of those things that irk me from time to time, but then again, I'm just a bit sensitive [somehow, being away from the states has caused that to deepen a bit more, since I don't feel anymore in place in China]. Besides, I know my own little brother can feel like one of the ten plagues from time, so...X) Little siblings are just like that.

Aside from that, I really do like reading the series. Keep your chin up and keep up the good work!

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refinnej357 October 28 2010, 10:04:52 UTC
This whole story is going in my favorites! I love it. LOVE. The poor boys are scared of each other, but its cute and I adore it!

Let's not ever let Alfred's sister and Arther's brothers hang out together... Together they would be largest pain-in-the-ass force the world has ever seen!

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allyoucaneater October 28 2010, 10:50:01 UTC
Yesss So they'll continue dating? Awesome~

I just can't stop grinning over the events in this chapter <3 Oh both of them; bickering over silly things and throwing food at each other in a restaurant. Cute.

Also, Scott Pilgrim's 'I'm in Lesbians with you' made me *hjfikhgbflaaail* ILU SO MUCH.

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