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jacquzy

(APH Fic) Lazarus, 7/7 - complete

Feb 24, 2012 18:12

Or how Prussia attended his own funeral, and almost became half-decent whilst doing so.

Pairing: Prussia-centric, PruAus
Rating: T
Summary: Prussia dies, and attends his own funeral. Except that he doesn't die, and it's all hilarious. Really. De-anon from the Kink Meme.
Disclaimer: I do not own Axis Powers Hetalia, nor do I claim to. The following is a ( Read more... )

fanfiction, pruaus, hetalia

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Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net pixie_rings February 24 2012, 23:32:46 UTC

I love your attention to detail. Really, the way Austria is described in this I truly felt as if I was watching everything through Prussia's. And indeed, the whole fic made me feel what Prussia was feeling, remember what he was remembering. It was so immersive, I love that. Except for feeling so wet throughout it all... That wasn't very nice. XD

These two. <3 They truly are adorably impossible (lol, I don't think I'll ever get tired of saying that). To go through centuries of dancing around one another for no reason other than anxiety... Stupid, stupid boys. *slaps Prussia then hugs them both*

I was just wondering about the penguins... They wouldn't happen to be Skipper, Private, Rico and Kowalski, would they? Stealth crossover would be awesome.

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net jacquzy February 29 2012, 21:10:44 UTC

Argh, thank you so much! I love your comments, you really are too kind :)

Bahaha, the penguins...basically, in an earlier draft, they were explained, slightly. Then I rewrote the whole thing but couldn't bear to take them out :P Yes, they can be those particular penguins, why not? XD

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net pixie_rings February 29 2012, 22:21:59 UTC

Comment ALL the fics! __o 7 o/
No, really, you deserve a shitload of comments.

Maybe Gilbert somehow stumbled into a Penguins of Madagascar episode? Crazier things have happened.
Just to satisfy my curiosity, what the hell /did/ happen with those penguins in the earlier draft? *can't be bothered with html tonight*

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net jacquzy February 29 2012, 22:38:46 UTC

asdfghjkl THAAAANKS <3

Hmm, well, I was just going to mention it really, but he was going to end up having the crash, then somehow angering the Serbian mafia, and there would be a chase/shoot-out in a zoo. Penguins would escape, hilarity ensues. Then I realised that had zero to do with the actual prompt :p

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net pixie_rings March 1 2012, 00:11:35 UTC

*Hugs*

And that's how Equestria was made! It's a delightfully cracky scenario. Kudos, I could never think up something so funny. XD Huh, maybe for another fic... Lol, maybe Austria comes home from all-day meetings, Prussia asks how his day was, he gets a short, boring recap. Austria asks how his day was, and Prussia flashbacks to the mafia and the penguins and all that insanity, but replies 'really boring'. /unasked-for suggestions, lolwut?

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net jacquzy March 1 2012, 12:16:59 UTC

/screams

Now you're making me want to write stuff :p

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net pixie_rings March 1 2012, 13:17:15 UTC

Aw, come on! The way you react, you'd think I was Francis! =3=

Moi? Jamais! I am completely innocent.

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net jacquzy March 1 2012, 17:55:42 UTC

sob sob sob there are so many things I want to write but then I look at all the work I have to do for uni and then I'm just like "nope."

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net pixie_rings March 2 2012, 00:28:01 UTC

I suppose I'm a little luckier there, being unemployed (bright side of life, as the Pythons said) gives me more time, but if I'm not 'in the zone', let's say, I tend to not write my best. But I tend to have way too many fics on the go, and I'm no good at prioritising. :/

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net jacquzy March 2 2012, 09:22:03 UTC

Oh gosh, if I didn't exercise some restraint I would have like 50 fics in-progress that would never get updated.

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net pixie_rings March 2 2012, 11:31:02 UTC

Ha... Hahaha. I try to only upload when I've finished something. That's why I tend to prefer to write long one-shots. I have a horrible track record with chaptered fics.

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net jacquzy March 2 2012, 22:27:32 UTC

That's a good system :) I wish I didn't like writing long fics so much, I feel as though things would be much easier then :'D

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net pixie_rings March 3 2012, 14:04:55 UTC

I try not to write chapter fic, then I do, and I'm all excited, I want to share... And then I never finish.

I'm just so lazy... Procrastination hunches over me in the form of internet and infinite games of solitaire. I lack motivation.
Ah well, as I once saw written on a Arte Nouveau image of Leonardo da Vinci: "It's not procrastination, just infinite multi-tasking!"

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net jacquzy March 4 2012, 12:11:05 UTC

Ha, that's a good way to look at it :')

Re: Because I can't seem to read it on ff.net pixie_rings March 4 2012, 17:56:45 UTC

Although when Leonardo did it it was indeniably cooler...

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