(APH Fic) The Curious and Terrible Tale of General Winter 3/7

[jacquzy]

Pairing: USUK
Rating: It's probably fine for everyone. (Look away from Romano's dirty mouth...)
Summary: Hans Christian Anderson's The Snow Queen retold. When Alfred vanishes into a cold storm of snow, Arthur begins a journey that will last his whole childhood in order to bring his best friend home. USUK Secret Santa gift for eat_my_shoes661Many thanks to my

Comments

[last_haven]

Oh, Ivan, betrayed by your own favorite flowers. Harsh.

Anyway, nice use of England's embroidery hobby from canon, it's a really nice touch.

[jacquzy]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it :)

[eat_my_shoes661]

Silly Arthur, falling in the river like that. I like how Ivan is the old woman. It suits him very well! I loved the talking sunflowers. It was very nice of them to help Arthur.
I read the Snow Queen last night because it has been a while since I last read it. You're doing so wonderfully!

[jacquzy]

Eeeeee! I'm so happy you like this! Will post the next part tonight :)

Thanks for commenting!

[fishwrites]

This is awesome! I love the style you're writing in; that story telling lilt is lovely! <3

[jacquzy]

Argh, thank you! I'm really pleased that you like it :)

[captainladyace]

Oh I love this! It's so nice, I've wanted to do something like this forever, but you definately do it justice! One of my favorite bits is that it's not romantic at this point, especially since they are little kids. Ivan was also nicely done, thank you for not villainizing him!

[jacquzy]

Aw, thank you! I love the idea of re-writing fairy tales, you should definitely do that :) And yeah, I hate villain!Russia, he may be a little...odd, but he can be really sweet too.

Thanks so much for commenting!