[3/10] Implied Consent

Nov 01, 2010 00:00

 Hai thar, I got somewhat close to 3 pages and I'm bored. -__-. So here.

If you want me to update faster than usual, just give me 3 pages of replies.

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Selca 3: ジェティとユンユル
The incident two days ago has left you craving for more of her. Every time you two are alone, you taste her and she hungrily kisses ( Read more... )

fanfic, yulsic

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vtension November 1 2010, 23:20:34 UTC
This part is confusing because you didn't specify who she was, I thought it was Yoona, but I guess it was Jessica?

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“Let’s go get your stuff unpacked.” She tells the other girl and she does not look at you for the entire time and you are slightly worried with what just happened. Your eyes are glued to her, while you look at her gather up bags of what you think are clothes.

You hear a door from the hallway slam shut and you are back to your own reality. You look at the girl sitting on your lap and you raise your brows at her, and she just gives you another smile.
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Although the writing is good, I really can't see where the storyline is heading. And I just realized that this being in 2nd person would make love scenes all the more awkward, for me at least. I couldn't read YulSic being intimate.

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jacqg November 2 2010, 01:58:05 UTC
Well I'm almost done with the fic, 8 out of 10 chaps are complete so if you would like to wait for me to finish those 2 remaining chaps, I'll give them to u bb <3.

And yup you can't really tell where it's going atm.

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