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Another Life

Oct 10, 2005 00:10

Title: Another Life
Author: Zenana
Pairing: Jack/James, bits of Jack/Desmond
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: For S2E1, “Man of Science, Man of Faith” (also S2E2, “Adrift,” as much of the same scene happens in that epi too)

Notes: Thank you foxxcub for Jack + James, and for the beta help. When I first saw Desmond running, in the dark of the stadium, I thought he ( Read more... )

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gorgon_mythos October 10 2005, 05:51:18 UTC

Woah. Just...wow. Just...some really good writing. A lot of heart in this and I love to read that :D Nicely done!
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When I first saw Desmond running, in the dark of the stadium, I thought he was Sawyer
I know, so did I! :0}

zenana7 October 11 2005, 01:16:23 UTC

Thank you!

And great minds etc. :)

nehellania October 10 2005, 06:31:57 UTC

Holy Hannah! I really enjoyed reading this and I've really got to commend you on writing this story. Your style and flow are great and your Jack-voice is right on the mark (at least, imho).

That last paragraph is a killer, particularly the last line. I have a feeling that the image of James/Sawyer floating out in the ocean, while Jack has nothing left on the island but Desmond is going to stay with me.

Great job here!

zenana7 October 11 2005, 01:17:56 UTC

Thanks for the detailed fb. I like yho!

nehellania October 11 2005, 01:22:35 UTC

Yay! I liked being liked!

As I love your writing and am hoping for more and since I'm thinking that anyone who writes so damn well has to be an interesting person...mind if I friend you?

zenana7 October 11 2005, 04:54:13 UTC

I'd be honored!