(LFN) Some Things You Lose (and Some Things You Just Give Away) (5/20)

[jackie_rambles]

Please see the Some Things You Lose (and Some Things You Just Give Away) Chapter Guide for story details including summary, warnings, disclaimers, etc.

Part Four: I Was Heading Into Danger, I Was Climbing Up the Walls

Some Things You Lose
(and Some Things You Just Give Away)
Part Five: My Dear, There's Been a Change of Plans

Comments

[madamedarque]

This is AWESOME. Seriously, it's not at all unbelievable because this is the kind of thing the show would have done--but you're doing it better. I know I sound like a broken record because I keep saying how great your Madeline voice is, but it's true; you capture the way her mind works so very well. And now you've brought Paul back! And made me still ship them even when they're in different bodies!

Please, please write the next chapter soon--and don't worry about them being long, I love it.

[jackiejlh]

Thank you so so so much!! I'm so glad you're enjoying this! I worry every time I update this fic that this chapter I'm posting will be the one that's just a little too weird - and we're not even at the "weird" parts yet. Lol.

Am out of town at the moment, but the next chapter is the one I've been anxious to get to since chapter one - it kind of arrived fully formed in my head - so I don't see it being too long. Just give me a few days to get over HP convention exhaustion; I head home Sunday, but will probably be unconscious for large portions of Sunday and Monday. :D

[clueless_02]

I have been busy for the past few days, but my day was made when I saw that you had updated this fic!

This fic is still so very awesome!! The way you capture the nuances of not only Madeline but the whole environment of Section is just amazing.

This part also made me realize how much I enjoy your choice to let TR's last memory be "Down A Crooked Path." (I know it works well for the premise of the fic, but so much happened in the last part of S4 that it is very intersting to see new!TR's reactions to the events of the last parts of S4. Like new!Madeline's reaction to Birkoff/Jason was so good!)

Anyways, I love so many things about this fic, and I can't wait for the next part!

[anonymous]

Hi,
I love that story. You had a great idea :) I really liked their first meeting. No words needed.
Can't wait to read the next part.
Thanks.