(LFN) Some Things You Lose (and Some Things You Just Give Away) (4/20)

Jul 05, 2010 15:16

Please see the Some Things You Lose (and Some Things You Just Give Away) Chapter Guide for story details including summary, warnings, disclaimers, etc.

Part Three: 'Cause the Chase is All You Know

Some Things You Lose
(and Some Things You Just Give Away)
Part Four: I Was Heading Into Danger, I Was Climbing Up the Walls

Even in a new body, she can still do that thing. )

series: some things you lose

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madamedarque July 5 2010, 22:05:29 UTC
Well, it's not super action-packed, but I still like it. Love Walter's description of Madeline's smile, and her thoughts in relation to Nikita--very twisty. I can't wait to see what happens next!

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jackiejlh July 6 2010, 01:45:16 UTC
Thank you! :D The next chapter will be a more eventful, at least. Lol.

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clueless_02 July 5 2010, 23:26:37 UTC
I really, really liked this part! I loved Walter and his musings on Madeline, especially the line about Madeline at nineteen.

"Home to what?"

I rather like this line. Not because I enjoy watching Nikita suffer, but because if feels like something she would say.

And your Madeline continues to be beyond awesome!!!

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jackiejlh July 6 2010, 01:46:51 UTC
Thank you!! Poor Nikita, I can't imagine she's enjoying being Operations at all. Especially not if she has to deal with resurrected!TR. Lol. They were never exactly her favorite people or anything... :D

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jaybee65 July 6 2010, 00:46:06 UTC
but in the end, she gets what she wants-a compromise. And not just a compromise, but one that leans entirely in her favor, whether Nikita realizes it or not.

Hahahahaha...here we go! It didn't take long, but then again I already knew that. *g*

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jackiejlh July 6 2010, 01:49:01 UTC
*grins*

I couldn't really imagine her being content to stay in that room for very long. Hell, I can't imagine anyone wanting to stay in that room for very long. :D And at least now the story can get more... eventful. Lol.

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anonymous December 19 2010, 17:00:39 UTC
I really love 19-year-old Madeline!

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